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Scribbled Thoughts

i stare at the walls
blank mind
and paper
laugh back

has the ink run dry
from pen, or thoughts
dried from mind?

i know the motion
upturn wrist
press firmly...
cut deep
bleed free

feel pain, relieve pain,
relive again
awaken my mind
so it bleeds 
flows outward
from within

one thought
one trickle
one moment of darkness
spilling across sheets of white
either way, i bleed again!

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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Sandra This is an intense and deep write. Full of emotion and feeling from your mind and heart. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Poetry Dan poem.

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:59:00 AM
    very interesting analogy, Sandra. I don't know how I ever missed this one. I am going to try to stay current with your lovely poetry for sure!!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 3:34:00 PM
    LOVE YOUR METAPHORES LIKE HOW TWO MINDS THINK ALIKE XXXDAVDSCOTT THANKS FOR YOUR KIND WORDS ON MINE

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:59:00 AM
    I have posed a similar question with "Tap Tap". Your poem truly reflects a writer's mind when trying to compose. Excellent! Allan

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you...I went over and read your poem...thanks for pointing yours out to me...hugs :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 4:15:00 AM
    I really like your skilful play with words Sandra. You used it to great effect to create a vehement piece of writing.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you my poet friend....hugs :)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Ooooo....I can relate to this...I love the every line here..."paper laugh back" lovely.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for your kind reply...hugs :)