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Love will Triumph

he stood there
his blank stare
fell below raised brows
as he tipped his hat
towards his love
 
the flame in his heart
burnt brighter than the fire
atop fresh logs
the soft glow lingered
yet it was no match 
for her father's temper
that snapped and popped
in disapproval
 
in one hour
they were to be married
 
behind the stained glass
a doorway lay hidden
guests awaited
down the hall
 
the fresh aroma
of roses cascading
from her bouquet
filled the air
 
his bride sat there
as if in mourning
on what was to be
her happiest day
her ivory dress 
matched the tone 
of her skin 
as all color faded
beneath the chill of
her father's words
 
her veil
still in its box
peered through
as her mother
sprang to her feet
and tried to calm him
 
her hands
pressed firm 
against his heart
as she whispered
love will prevail
 
in the distance
the music began to play...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:15:00 PM
    Great description and similes here! The stained glass, the roses, the music... all a very ingenious take on the painting.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 3:08:00 PM
    congrats on your win in the contest with this romantic yet bittersweet take on the theme :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 2:55:00 PM
    A very heartfelt and romantic poem! Just beautiful! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 8:35:00 AM
    A beautiful story is told in this enchanting poem! Terrific poem for the contest! Congratulations to you, Sandra!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 12:02:00 AM
    HMMM....The last two verses got me right there, simply amazing. Congratulations on the win Sandra

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:53:00 PM
    Enchanting romantic piece and congratulations on being in the winner's circle Sandy.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:11:00 PM
    I just love it, I was drawn into the story. Well done, congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 4:49:00 PM
    WOW, I had not seen this one. How did I miss it? This is one of my top favorites in the contest. BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:33:00 AM
    EXTREMELY HEART TOUCHING BEAUTIFUL PIECE SANDRA

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 12:14:00 PM
    A very romantic and beautifully written poem, Sandra! I think this represents the painting very nicely. Wonderful work! I wish you good luck in the contest!...Thank you for the kind comments. They are very much appreciated! :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:20:00 AM
    Great write Sandra, really enjoyable read, such romantic hope showing itself in your write. well done, have blessed day, Gordon

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 6:21:00 PM
    Hello Sandra, A very hearty romantic piece here. Exhibits your talent very clearly when it comes to passion. I can see this kind of love will come out on top.... Sweet surrender ending... xox~ Linda