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Zompire

(Quatrains I wrote with Jack Horne. BTW, Zompire is a word invented by Jack and both of us like vampire/zombie stories!) I didn't sleep a wink last night And tossed and turned in bed; As morning came I swear I was Just like the Living Dead. In fact, when I went out the door, Into the morning sun, I cringed! My skin felt like a steak About to be well done. A zompire I'd become, you see, And now when it is day, I'm sleeping (but I never slept At night time anyway!) OUR TANKA Not able to sleep I went to the bathroom and Looked in the mirror. . . I now have no reflection The Dawn of the Living Dead Andrea Dietrich with Jack Horne, written Sept 14, 2013 For Shadow Hamilton's New Contest Team Work Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:47:00 PM
    This is a creative and imaginative write. Any horror lover will enjoy this fantastic write. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Hijinx poem.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 6:12:00 PM
    I do not watch those movies or I would never sleep. I tend to watch romantic or comic movies so I can sleep the night. Nice double you have penned. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 4:13:00 AM
    You have to be a real horror story lover to come up with a name like zompire. I get it. You can add me to your list of vampire lovers. I'm just getting into zombies, but I've been a vampire fan since I was just a tyke. You combined the two quite nicely.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 12:57:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this unique poem and dark collaboration! Really great team work! Congratulations to both of you on your win!...Thank you very much for the placement of my poem in your acrostic contest! I truly appreciate it, Andrea!

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 9:51:00 PM
    Guys! Congrats on your well done steak (and collab) and keep in mind that a poetry zombire (!!!) is smiling at this fine work! :) G.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:56:00 PM
    Got a chuckle with this winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Andrea, nice team work.......... lovely win............SKAT

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:07:00 PM
    This is so much fun, congrats to you ants Jack!

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:32:00 PM
    congrats on 3rd with your quatrain in team work contest Ty for entering

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Zompire---I like it!! :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 10:46:00 PM
    So good! I like!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:24:00 PM
    lol, thanks for writing this with me, my friend - will read the comments next time

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:56:00 AM
    nice collab....best wishes

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:09:00 AM
    Zompire? What can I say besides something conpleatly childish being a monster fan myself. Your Zompire should be eaten by one of Sharon's trolls.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 3:24:00 AM
    I can relate to your poem..I was a complete zompire when Christie was born..Still am sometimes..Joining your group of vamps and zombs

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:03:00 PM
    More please. The connection of the macabe and just waking up to reality is a little scary. :) Enjoyed very much. Good luck to both of you in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Brilliant and SO fun!! You two make a fantastic team! :)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 7:41:00 AM
    The Zombie Apocalypse is indeed upon us. What to do, what to do? I know... Write poems! Good luck in the contest.... jack

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:54:00 PM
    Great teamwork, well done to both. I'm beginning to think I never sleep at night, it's 2.57 am here, and I'm reading your poems, does that make me a super fan? lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Wonderful collaboration. Both enjoyed a lot. Very funny poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

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