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Il Fiore Della Bruma P3

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Il Fiore Della Bruma P3

Eyes are a beauty like no other,
Where your deepest sense shines like lustrous glass;
The perfect crystal structure,
A divine un-shattered over easeful stars.

Today I looked upon the light.

Today I woke from a heavy slumber
With memory much the same as dreams,
Blinds had been lifted,
And I draw my stillness
Towards the feathered window release.

I pour each breath to this outside air;
The calmly gaze of the soulful sky
May catch them, with wings extended backwards,
Embracing the pure and loyal tide.

The gentle hope of a heart.

Oh, draw in these breaths,
A delicate mixture of a transcendent draught,
Imbued with the devoted kiss of the echoing lake:
Cooled and tranquil to delve.

And lunar rush, tender compassion;
Both wild and soothing,
As the forever bond of eternal arms.
This draught I mix, uncork and bubble
Lulled and sweet, foamed over-flowing,
Gently poured, in reflection of sunburnt oak
And drunk in loyal acceptance.

May my hands never depart
From the shores of your warmth
And with sight fixed to a beauty like no other,
And with a flame in heart:
Today I looked upon the light of words
 I love you… Hope you don’t read that and feel awkward… 

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  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:32:00 AM
    Great complimentary winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 6:32:00 AM
    Congrats for the first place win in the contest, Aiden

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 10:40:00 AM
    Aiden the poem is off the wall and beautiful.... Congratulations on your deserved winning poem. Perfectly complimented by your pen. Have a nice day. xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Wow....beautiful....much deserved win..congratulations

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 5:43:00 PM
    Vey beautiful , congratulations' , a well deserved win !

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 10:12:00 AM
    This takes one's breath away......it is so beautiful. I'm honored to share this placement with you, Aiden

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 11:43:00 AM
    This is beautiful , no one should feel awkward with " I love you " ;)

    Asoll Avatar Aiden Asoll
    Date: 9/21/2013 2:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou :) "I love you" is a message we both take seriously so it was the greatest feeling when I woke up to that.