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Calliope, My Muse

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Calliope, My Muse

Was once inspired, but now too tired
To search for more expressive ways
To convey my Heart's inert Desires-
The place where my Ideas played

I beg of thee, sweet Calliope,
To fill my Mind with budding Prose
But I am touched by Melpomene-
In freezing Fires, thus reposed

My outlook dreary, I have a theory-
That I shall stay forever weary
And I see it, Oh! Quite clearly
That I shall miss them all so dearly!

My Muses Mute; But Atropos
The Fate that begged for one more post
With her Shears shorn ev'ry fear
That I might write as just a Ghost

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  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:27:00 PM

    This is great, and I congratulate you. She put up a blog to only give the advice to her directly, so I went and withdrew my poem from her contest. Man, I wish I had left it in now that I am seeing all the winners how they did theirs!!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 3/11/2014 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I just took a gamble that the host would relate; it doesn't always pay, but I figure what the heck, you know? I'll give it a try :)
  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:08:00 PM

    Yeah, I really enjoyed the tinge of exhaustion u added.- and the style in which you wrote is one I enjoy.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 3/11/2014 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Amy; glad you enjoyed :)
  1. Date: 3/10/2014 5:22:00 AM

    Very inspirational write. Congrats on the fine win, chan

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 3/10/2014 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, Doc :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2014 3:46:00 PM

    Congrats on the Win!!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 3/10/2014 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Most appreciated, Dave :)
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 7:38:00 AM

    I think it's perfect. The flow, rhyme, meter and I love the language you like to use. (I have written a piece - 'Serenade of Love' that you may like to read - I think you'll enjoy it) To me it has a touch of the Greek mythology as well a sprinkling of the language of Poe. =)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/5/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks, Thomas. Greek mythology definitely influenced this piece (I have several others poems inspired by Greek mythology). I will be reading more of your work; you can be assured of that. Thanks for the read and review :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:00:00 AM

    An impeccable rhythm and rhyming scheme you used here. Except for the last stanza which seems to drift away a little from the scheme. But most truly excellent work friend.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/20/2013 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks as always, my friend. This one got away from me; it's longer than my usual fare. I was a little all over the place in this piece, and it definitely needs some revising ;)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Great theme, content and title! I'll get to the critique ASAP. Hope you're having a lovely day~Karen

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/18/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Karen; I can't help myself: I love Greek mythological references ;)