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Peace-Offering

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Peace-Offering

My Hopes renewed and doubts subdued,
Pray no grief comes soon intrude-
May Peace of Mind thus tell me true,
"The only one for me is you."

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Chan This is so sweet and full of love and feeling. I can tell the devotion you have for this special someone. Glad you enjoyed my Happen to You poem. Hugs

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    Date: 10/26/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, sweet pea. It's really not about a person: it's about my perpetual search for peace of mind, so I sort of wrote it from a personification perspective ;)
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Cute poem Archaic. Loved it! : )

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    Date: 9/20/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are too kind and wonderful, Mustapha :)
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Love your poetry... Mine is a series of comedy like poems about the events at Troll Lake... Not spectacular, just fun... Drawn out... a story in each one... When I do serious I usually do deep and dark... My hubby likes the fun ones best... He even helps me pick out the ideas... and to write a few... more for grown up kids... you might say... I could do better... but like the fun! People clamor for them around here... can't wait for the next one... The UPS Guy got one made especially for him.

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    Date: 9/19/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliment, Carol. Now that I understand your writing perspective a little better, I shall be able to leave a more informed review. Thanks for enlightening me on your writing process. Hope you are well today :)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 3:36:00 PM
    I agree with yvette and Catie... perfectly penned with sweet emotion. :)

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    Date: 9/18/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks, Karen. Every now and again, you'll get a "sweet" one from me, but not too often (it'll ruin my Gloom and Doom cred lol)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 11:55:00 AM
    I love this , brilliant ..Having trouble or frustration with my last write ~ not disappointed to read your new poem ~ 7

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    Date: 9/17/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol *HOPE
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    Date: 9/17/2013 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the compliment, Yvette; I appreciate it so much. Hoe you have a breakthrough with your new piece; I know how frustrating it is to get stuck on a poem or be dissatisfied with it. Here's wishing you well, and thanks again :)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:32:00 AM
    Oh, that's so sweet, Chan. I really enjoyed this one. hugs, catie :)

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    Date: 9/17/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Catie; where ya been, hon? Missed you! :)