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T-Minus Ten

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T-Minus Ten

For understanding, I summon- beckon!
But, lo! The Time! It feels Infinite
Our lives could change in just a second
Or long be gone in just a minute...

'Tis only those who fear Hereafter
Who live a life of misery
Just fill your Mind with sounds of laughter-
And forever think of me!

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 10:01:00 PM

    evrythng which is born has to die 1 day thr is no use of fearing death its better to enjoy the time lord has given us rather than fearing the inevitable

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/26/2013 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I agree with you, Vin. Thanks for taking time to read and review this piece; I very much appreciate it :)
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:40:00 AM

    you have a sly sense of humor. Yes, we could all be gone in seconds, and there is no need to fear the next life.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/23/2013 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the read and review, Wayne; I'm happy you agree with the sentiment and enjoy what humor I try to sporadically inject into my pieces. Thanks again! :)
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 5:30:00 AM

    Deep philosophical write Archaic that compliments an impeccable rhythm and rhyme.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/18/2013 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's people like you who make me smile just about every single morning when I log in, Mustapha. Thank you for making my morning that much better :)