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The honorable senator of Rome
Petronius, a handsome man of wealth
for whom the poets held respectful gnome,
that contemplated 'bout the State's good health
like God was worshiped by the sightly maid
- Eunike; whose devotion was unpaid.

Unanswered her obedience and love,
uncherished were and thus, transformed to pain;
tormented her young senses, made her rove,
- alone confessed, her flesh needs to abstain
- his handsome thus admired and marble bust,
apprised her instincts, highborn and robust.

Evincible, unrequited pleas,
the maid exalted to the sovereign sire,
his despotism she served just to reprise,
thus punished by the whip for her desire,
accepts the lashes whispering his name
with deponent her dedicated flame.

The punisher was ordered to beware,
not to cause scathes upon her perfect skin;
her sire's ingratitude could not forswear
love's burning tears she shed, for was a sin
to disobey her master's potent will
- infusing lashes deftly to instil.

Alone Eunike stares at his stone bust;
his handsomeness could cause a Sol's eclipse;
oh, may the Fates milleflorus entrust
their gifts upon his brow and much loved lips;
her arms embracing him, the maid's face couth,
shall osculate the marble bust's cold mouth.

© G.V., 09-07-2013 All rights reserved
(5 sextains, sestines or sestinas  - Iambic pentameter)

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:32:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 12:26:00 AM
    This is beautiful and sad. More beautiful than sad. You're very talented!

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:41:00 PM
    Awesome job, Giorgio. Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 8:44:00 PM
    A very sad story of unrequited love. I am sure that most of us can relate to this poem, to some extent. Excellent work, as usual, Giorgio! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 2:28:00 AM
    Bravissima!! I see you bagged Linda's contest. Of course I'm not surprised. Congratulations, my gifted friend. I'm muuuchly honored to be sharing a forum with you. Hugs, Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:27:00 PM
    Your eloquence could cause a sol's eclipse (sorry, had to steal that line). A beautiful story well-told. Soupmail. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:26:00 AM
    an interesting story told beautifully.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 5:59:00 AM
    This is has the strength and beauty of the golden age, and very descriptive! Love this style and form... And thank you Giorgio, for the honor of placing me among the winners in your contest, so thrilled!!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Ow dear Eunike where did your heart lead you.You tell the story so well Giorgio..Taken my imagination to journey the past .So vivid your words makes me ponder about women who give their heart just to be maltreated and used.Excellent.

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:25:00 AM
    Great iambic meter you always set forth, Girogio. I was so surprised and delighted to come here tonight and see myself on your winners' list. Thanks so much. by the way, your poetry has such an intellectual or classical feel to it. You are one of a kind here.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Wonderful poetry, historic subject, which you enlighten us all with...

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:25:00 PM
    I'd have to say this is the best poem I have read today thus far! Very impressive work, my friend! Keep it up! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 1:20:00 PM
    am beguiled by your gripping images and intricate plot... rhyme is your second name, Giorgio; much enjoyed!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Iambic pentameter seems to be quite a passion with you. I think you are quite well versed in metrical composition,Giorgio

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 4:58:00 AM
    hi Giorgio I am fascinated by this style which I have never tried. you do it so effortlessly and always top class great work Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 4:46:00 AM
    Interesting work penned..Enjoyed reading this morning..Sara