Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Fool of Infinite and Queen of Fate

Suzanne Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney - LIFETIME Premium Member Suzanne Delaney - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Fool of Infinite and Queen of Fate which was written by poet Suzanne Delaney. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Suzanne Delaney

Best Suzanne Delaney Poems

+ Fav Poet

Fool of Infinite and Queen of Fate

Fool of Infiniti

A wanton bird pecks at the stars
A Jester peers through crystal bars
This prison of love with rainbow hue
Illusion parts to lets you through

On dragon wings forever free
You quest into your dreams to see
Smoke and mirrors and shadow haze
To guide you through an endless maze

Slow motion tear rolls down her cheek
Its only passion that you seek ?
Engulfed in strange duality.
She wonders her reality

Your eyes still mock her with desire
Your kisses light her inner fire
Your touch can melt her to your will
But you will never take your fill

Black widow spider guards your heart
She spun the web, she keeps it taut
It is your only fatal flaw.
A secret, silent metaphor.

And all about her swirl the dreams
The nightmares all with voiceless screams
And in her hand the strangest key
To fit the door of What Will Be ?

And when her eyes search yours again
You take her to the spider den
You spin the dreams she hopes to see
And lock your hearts in mystery.

So enter in to lick the flame
Eternal prisoner of the game
Illusion is false imagery
She whispers your Infinity


The Queen of Fate

The Queen of Fate by the outer Gate
Her carriage to Nowhere, will await
Her cloak is wrapped against the night
Her eyes are wide with peculiar fright

Gray horses eyes turn back in fear
With thunderclaps upon her ear
Blue jagged lightning points the way
Along the path to yesterday

Cold, sullen driver cracks his whip
His crooked smile curls round his lip
His horses leap the cruel abyss
Dark Queen of Fate sees none amiss

Above the mist a gate appears
Who will wipe the Gate-man's tears ?
Gray horses strike and paw the air
Fate Queen ascends the carriage stair

And all about her swirl the dreams
The nightmares all with voiceless screams
And in her hand a wondrous key
To lock Enigma's Mystery

Pass through the gate O Queen of Fate
Another carriage will await
Drawn by Steeds of Promises
Illusion Starts and Finishes

Suzanne Delaney
Iambic Tetrameter
Gothic Theme
For Giorgio's Impress Me Iambic Contest

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
  1. Date: 2/26/2014 10:44:00 PM
    Beautifully written... Verlena

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 12:01:00 PM
    Amazing write. Congratulations on the win!

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 10:22:00 AM
    fantastic write Suz...congrats on the win

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 6:01:00 AM
    Wow, and another thing, WOW...Goose bumps here! Every line a gem but if I were forced to pick a fav it would be: 'The nightmares all with voiceless screams' (Yikes!) Good stuff my friend and congrats...

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 9:33:00 PM
    Huh... Near speechless. Your imagery, metaphor, simile, allegory...WOW! A new favorite is added to my growing list. Grats on a well deserved placement.! Christopher

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 8:55:00 PM
    Your poem certainly impressed me. congratulations on yur big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 7:44:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 5:10:00 PM
    Wow Suz a suburb rhyme. A fantastic read. Congratulations on your winning poem - Connie

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 4:27:00 PM
    and it goes to my faves.

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 4:26:00 PM
    Big congradulations. i was going to paste and copy but i really am impressed with the first one. i like to say IT KNOCKED MY SOCKS OFF when i get something this good.you should have left off the second part. it was just ok. but the first part; a masterpiece!!! i hate to be beaten out in a contest unless the work really impresses me and this one did. i give you the highest praise. JOHN HENRY LOVING III

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 4:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. This piece certainly impressed me.

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 4:40:00 AM
    Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition, Suz

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 2:42:00 AM
    - Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, SuZ. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 5:56:00 PM
    Excellent read Suz, congrats on your splendid win luv xxx

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:42:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Hi Suz, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Glorious! This is a brilliantly crafted piece of poetry... Congrats Suz, on your awesome win. Glad to be reading your work today, hugs..

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 11:58:00 PM
    A great poem and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 10:54:00 PM
    A tremendous write I enjoyed reading this morning my dear friend SuZ. Kudos! So love it and enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and my hearty congratulations on your super win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 11:56:00 PM
    Congrats on winning the place in the contest, Suz

Next>|Last