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First Kiss

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First Kiss

Come here was the motion
that rendered her helpless
and placed her under a majestic spell
quiet eyes, half parted lips dampening
like rose petals waiting to collect
it's first drops of morning dew.
and a heart that flutters as
hummingbird wings as it delectably
feasts upon its precious nectar.  

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  1. Date: 9/17/2013 1:11:00 PM

    CLASSICAL AND ROMANTIC. I ENJOYED IT. THANKS...JM

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:55:00 PM

    AMAZING BEAUTIFUL PIECE I TIP THE HAT TO ITS BEAUTY

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 12:08:00 PM

    This was delicious w/that small tease of seduction. Ah, the simple pleasures. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Hi Madelin, A lovely romantic write that summons imagery.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:45:00 AM

    - A sweet memory and an even more sweeter poem :))) - Have a nice Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)