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FIRST KISS

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Below is the poem entitled FIRST KISS which was written by poet Madelin Barton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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FIRST KISS

Come here was the motion
That rendered her helpless 
And placed her under a majestic 
spell

Quiet eyes, half parted lips 
Dampening like rose petals 
Waiting to collect It's first 
drops of morning dew

And a heart that flutters 
Like hummingbird wings 
As it delectably feasts 
Upon its precious nectar

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  1. Date: 6/5/2014 8:47:00 AM
    Beautifully written...love the imagery!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 1:11:00 PM
    CLASSICAL AND ROMANTIC. I ENJOYED IT. THANKS...JM

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton
    Date: 5/27/2014 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:55:00 PM
    AMAZING BEAUTIFUL PIECE I TIP THE HAT TO ITS BEAUTY

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton
    Date: 5/27/2014 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Liam very encouraging words always thank you -Maddie
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 12:08:00 PM
    This was delicious w/that small tease of seduction. Ah, the simple pleasures. Excellent job!

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton
    Date: 5/27/2014 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Love speaks to the heart, I just listen thank you for commenting on my poetry Maddie
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:49:00 AM
    Hi Madelin, A lovely romantic write that summons imagery.. Ken

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton
    Date: 5/27/2014 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ken
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:45:00 AM
    - A sweet memory and an even more sweeter poem :))) - Have a nice Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)