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Your Melodious Memories

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Your Melodious Memories

Whole night you were in my musing
Everything forgets except your face
Today I'm late at bed
No one to wake me early
When i saw you in far
Corner of dry, dark sky
My heart gets torn,
Eyes can't stop flowing
We are missing you "Mom"...

He left the world you leave
Don't talk,
Rough movement and even
His smiles erased.
Still waiting for you every eve at the gate
The old breezed love
Can't take the pain.

My small brother asks me
When you will come?
Your daughter loss
All her faith and joy.

I can't see their faces
It's remind me you,
Your love
Babbling
Chattering before bed to rig up mosquito-curtain
Run after me while going to work!
My heart seems to burst
And blow up with grief...
I miss you at my every step,"Mom"

He was empty before you
Again fall into nothingness
They lost their playmate
I lost my best friend !

Nobody forbids me,
No one says don't do this
The call from back to return soon is vanished
Sometimes i feel so lonely,
My soul intends to cries out
Like a simple child
And pray to you,"Please come back Mom"
If not possible to punish me
Make me cry once !

Aaborta Dey
This poem is based on death of one of my friend's Mom and i feel more love to my parents when i read this.

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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 1:10:00 PM

    This is a very touching and deeply emotional poem. Wonderful work! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:43:00 AM

    a very touching poem.. its terrible to lose our loved ones, everything becomes so tough after that, doesn't it? congrats on your win, Litan

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/5/2013 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Absolutely right...thanks
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:43:00 AM

    I'm happy having your love and friendship.Welcome to your visit to my wining work.Thank you all........Litan

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 12:51:00 PM

    congrads on your win

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 11:15:00 AM

    Terrific, Litan. Congrats. Ralph

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning.. Litan Dey

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/3/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your sweet visit
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 2:28:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 1:52:00 PM

    litan,love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 5:00:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on your awesome win, Litan. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/3/2013 11:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks friend......for nice visit
  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:34:00 PM

    Hello Litan, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poems" win. xox~ LINDA

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/4/2013 12:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice to hear you
  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:32:00 PM

    ...and congrats on another win with this gem :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Sincere poem and great victory. Congrats on both. :) G.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 3:06:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Litan. G.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 6:24:00 AM

    - I looked into the past winners list .. where I found this .... a second place!! - Well deserved!! - CONGRATULATIONS, LITAN !!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/3/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for well wish granny
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:27:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:45:00 PM

    Congrats Litan for your winning poem xxx

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:15:00 PM

    Litan beautiful epic congrats on win in epic contest Shadow x smile

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/4/2013 12:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks friend....
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:51:00 PM

    Hello Sweet Litan.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/3/2013 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you skat
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 3:44:00 PM

    what a beautiful poem...it touches the reader...I too have lost my mom...congrats on your win

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/4/2013 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks...have a great day
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:21:00 PM

    a beautiful and sad tribute. Wonderful tale of love. Congratulations =)

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/4/2013 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love you nice visit to my poem,Thomas
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:32:00 AM

    Hi Litan, :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 7:54:00 AM

    Hello Litan, a very deep poem.. wow.. the ending is intense. thanks for sharing your emotions in such a heartfelt poem...XOX...linda

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 10/3/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice to hear from you.....
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:00:00 PM

    how sad this is and very heartfelt and sincere.

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 9/24/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks dear
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:03:00 PM

    Oh... this is such a sad, emotional poem, thank you for sharing this.

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 9/21/2013 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks you for commenting on my work....
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:23:00 AM

    Very profound and deeply felt. Thanks for stopping by my poetry. Hugs, Gail

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 9/24/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    nice to read your comment
    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 9/21/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Angel.... to read your comment from my bed.Have a lovely sunday
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:39:00 AM

    A very deep write full of longing and pain...Thank you for sharing this glimpse into your heart....

    Dey Avatar Litan Dey Date: 9/16/2013 2:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Welcome to my work and thanks for your visit