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Wives with Knives

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Wives with Knives

Through and through though more to do-
A thousand thoughts to misconstrue!
Too long I've waited, too sad and sedated
To live a lie I declare is true...
And so it seems that in my dreams
I bathe myself in Moonlight beams
That light the night, turn black to white
And will slit my throat at any means!

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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Chan The Man This is intense and very deep. You made the reader feel every emotion and pulled them in with every word. Nicely done Glad you enjoyed my Wishes poem. Thanks for the nice comment. HHHMMM Should I be afraid what you'd wish for. HEE HEE

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    Date: 10/26/2013 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Glad this poem affected you in that way; thanks for the review, sweet pea! :) <3
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:06:00 PM
    You do dark poetry really well. You remind me of a famous English poet. Well done and please put down that knife..lol.

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    Date: 9/16/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dark is what I do best lol Thanks as always, Mustapha :)