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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 5:38:00 PM

    Handsome verses yourself, sir. Short, sweet, and full of meaning. Can't get much better.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 9:50:00 AM

    Nice to read your Poetry David...Thank you for thinking to drop by...I've really missed You...Have the Best Xmas so richly DESERVE...My friend...Thanks again...for dropping by.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 11:14:00 PM

    Wonderful! Hope you keeping well David!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:13:00 PM

    I loved this uplifting lovely poem David!

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:10:00 AM

    Hi David So great too see you back on the grid and posting again. I have missed your writing. This piece is wonderful-- first time I have seen an 'Englyn', so thanks for the education again.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:53:00 AM

    Dear David - Whatever the form, I love your tone of happiness. Hope you are well. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 3:13:00 AM

    Love it ;}

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 8:13:00 AM

    This is such a beautiful heartfelt write David.. Just checking in on you to see how you are doing *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:31:00 PM

    This piece seems to tell us you're searching for and have found the light in your life... I hope so... Keep in touch... your friend...

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:08:00 PM

    It is so nice to read your poetry again David, never heard of this form, but the content is lovely xxx

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 1:53:00 PM

    Very nice David... throws a positive light on life... reading the comments below, I see that you have happily emerged from a darker period... I'm happy for that, and hope that you'll be contributing lotsa new poetry... Terry

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:34:00 AM

    David----I enjoyed reading your put feelings into words so well! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:12:00 AM

    We are all...Grateful to God...You've come back David...A man among are... This poem is so bright ...and filled with tender loving hope...brought a tear out...from hiding...just to feel it's light.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:59:00 AM

    touching the light to nourished by moments divine.. so wonderfully relayed, dear david.. been a while; you are missed!...:) huggggs

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:01:00 PM

    thank you for embracing and sharing the light........ SKAT

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:04:00 PM

    Embrace the warmth it brings, David! Welcome back, I've kept the throne reserved for its maker :)... Wonderful work always!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:02:00 PM

    SEeing this one again and hoping all is well with you. the last line of this says so much.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:44:00 PM

    I thought of you today. I remember that you were always one to encourage me very much in my writing. When I would feel that I couldn't write, you told me I could. I miss that. I thought I'd come by here, and I was happy to see that you had a new poem I hadn't seen yet. I love this poem David, it is full of hope, and yes, we sing. Thank you for reminding me. Big hugs.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:07:00 AM

    YE sing David- singing makes me feel better! [Very well David! Please write me a long email and catch me up, re:sonnet I think it works well to focus on the change the volta in my verse and in a modern sonnet there really do not seem to be any hard and fast rules?] Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:51:00 AM

    Yes! Something hopeful in this runaway world. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:45:00 PM

    The last line hits me like no other. Once in a while, we'll sing. The actual concept is sad and yet there's hope there. As if to say, we will find time to sing, to be happy.. because we deserve that. Wow. Wonderful write. I LOVE it. Love, Juli-MIchelle

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:06:00 PM

    Was thinking of you just now and decided to see if you had ever posted a new one recently. What a delight to see this, DAvid. Sure hope to see more of you soon. Are things getting better?

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 12:28:00 AM

    Hi David nice to see you writing again we missed you xx

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 2:23:00 PM

    David, this poem draws a smile and a happy tear and you ended it perfectly because it is not an end but beginning. Faving this

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:04:00 AM

    Nice to see you back David, very beautiful poem!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:06:00 AM

    Hi David great words , it's great to see you back missed you my friend, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:00:00 AM

    This is so bright and glorious. Excellent work, David! I loved reading your composition this evening. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:54:00 AM

    Hello David...*Big Hug *..Welcome back ! I am so elated to see u after a long time...plz don't stop writing ! I hope ur feeling better now...keep writing as it helps us to forget our sorrows for the time being.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:14:00 PM

    You write so beautifully. It flows so nicely and then seemingly, just disappears.. Very well written. Lucinda

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 3:04:00 PM

    beautifully written....sounds like the light is overcoming the darker times ...sing on :)