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Hot babe

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Hot babe

a fireworks
exploding in the sky
hot sun
dazzling beautiful
looking into 
your eyes
 
you captured me
like a fire 
it radiates you
the warmth inside 
a spark 
picked up 

sharing my warmth
electrically divine
for me 
you are 
a work of art
inner vision
masterpiece

in leaving oneself 
wanting more,
a heart on fire 
burning with desire,
for the one 
burning hot
like you

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  1. Date: 9/16/2013 5:49:00 AM
    Hi Liam, Charming write..Nicely done my friend.. Ken

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/16/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU MY GOOD FRIEND BEAUTIFUL COMMENT KEN DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:51:00 AM
    Woah, this is so beautiful!!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/16/2013 6:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    BINDU THANK YOU DEARLY WONDERFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 12:52:00 AM
    Beautiful romantic yearning for love, liam

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/16/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:53:00 PM
    This captures the essence of yearning desire ..Beautiful : ) Magnifique!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/16/2013 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YOUR COMMENT CAPTURES BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I THANK YOU DEARLY CHARMAINE HEARTFELT APPRECIATED HAVE A BLESSED DAY
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 9:36:00 AM
    you have become my "Picasso " or John Lennon " I am really in love with the words .

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/15/2013 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    DAZZLING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT YVETTE I PASS A SMILE THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 8:49:00 AM
    liam, lovely write.... deep...thanks for the nice comment on my latest...Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/15/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LINDA THE PLEASURE IS YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED