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  1. Date: 8/3/2014 4:39:00 AM
    ShEESH! Almost forgot the HOTT 7 Rate!~

  1. Date: 8/3/2014 4:38:00 AM
    BRO! I commend you for your poetry and relentless community building efforts here at the soup!

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 7:42:00 PM
    I wondered if with your love you built a cradle? Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:13:00 PM
    Awesome winning poem... my friend... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:52:00 AM
    congrats on your win Scribe

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win..Your poems are so unique..Always great verses to chew on..Excellent and beautiful.By the way its great hearin you on drake s show

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:06:00 PM
    This is very it! Congratulations

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:15:00 AM
    this is so nice. I don't know your placement. I am just noticing congratulations beneath my comment so congrats to you. you deserved it! btw, about an ocean in Utah. Did you know the Great Salt Lake was the remnant of an ocean from long ago?

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:35:00 PM
    I love how you call it "Sanding" I believe your name is grooved on the golden sand, one can't erase your words, congratulations my dear, on a job well done xxx

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:19:00 AM
    I loved it ...Seren

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:22:00 AM
    what a clever and beautiful take on the theme...enjoyed your brilliant use of metaphor...congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:15:00 AM
    This was one of my favorites !!! A top winner in my book !

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:50:00 AM
    Superb write this is my dear friend Scribe. So love it and so enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing and my huge hearty congratulations on your great win. Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Marlon so exquisite a write love it congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement fam!!!! Burning together!!! Lol

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 1:50:00 PM
    The craft of the carpenter melds along with the craft of you as a writer.....and the love incorporated into this poem is magical and sanded down to be as smooth as velvet. What a lovely poem...... the men in my family are loving fathers (grandfathers) uncles, and examples too....and are also good with a hammer, nail and sandpaper. I think there may be a link? I love this speaks to me!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:25:00 AM
    I just read your recent comment. I didn't know there was a "sand" contest. "Sandpaper" just popped into my head while writing yesterday, which is kinda weird now that I am reading a bunch of poems with sandpaper as part of the theme. Hey, you took a unique angle for the contest. You approached a topic that someone could turn into a very stale poem, and you created a lively, meaningful piece. The ending is so cool .... I think if we attempt to define it, we belittle it and ourselves.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 9:18:00 AM
    I may have to take mine out of the contest after reading this one. But I was only trying to deliver an important message this time around only to those who receive. If its not about sex, evil, and etc its ignored. Anyway, this is here is real fam. I like how you take your personal experience and share it amongst the world.

    Date: 9/18/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What happened to your comment fam on my poem? Lol
    Date: 9/18/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Marlon what a great write and unique approach to the contest. Gotta say when you look back on it, the sandpaper had an important role to play and love remained. All the best for the contest with this gem ;)

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:47:00 PM
    wow! Scribe, love is hard to explain at times. however the love you speak of is yours and no one else. A dream only your heart knows of. I'm happy to have read this one from you. This is the best sand image view. Beautiful Rings, that mean the world to you :-). always a fan Linda