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The Wind

~~The Wind~~
            
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Look into my eyes
Follow me into a world of ecstasy
There and only there
Will you find the peace to unwind
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Beautiful brown eyes not blue
Shady lids, stunning  ocean view
Embracing every word 

Hear the wind whispers your name
Come with me
Drown with me
Into the abyss of loving rain
Embrace this moment as I draw you in with words
Release you with the warmth -------I was there

I Share--I take
I LOVE--I HATE
Into my arms
I am the charm
Around your neck
Around your wrist
Listen to the voice from my beating heart
It yearns
The freedom of touch
The freedom of speech. 
Of love, 
Of purity
Like the wind
I'll find my way
Into your heart
Arouse the cheerful energy
Of your insecurity and pen
Follow me into the sea
There we will fall into the deep
Build sand castles 
Around dreams of reality
Slip into my aura light 
Set to the rhythm of the oceanic night

Now, listen to the breeze
It's called out your name
It's only a matter of time----------------
You'll find yourself calling out...... mine

by; PD
Dedicated to all my loving friends & fans :-)

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  1. Date: 4/2/2014 11:00:00 PM

    Just here to bid you goodnight. A few more comments to go!!

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 7:38:00 AM

    Hi my dearest sis! Biggest hugs! Stopping by once again to enjoy & embrace one of the very precious gems of my loveliest & most fave poet . Adoring this stellar writes of urs as always.TYTYSM again. By the way hope u'r doin fine. Was here @ soup since 5.3opm. I'm sending u my loving hugs before logging off & goin 4 dinner. Miss u dearest sis & BFF of mine. Many warm hugs! I'll b back soon. lovem4everLeo

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:19:00 PM

    I love your vision of nature in this one especially the wind iminagey this is simply beautiful and full of feeling towards nature itself. cheri i have one about the winds chasing each other around the world as if they were children spirits maybe one day i'll take it out of my archieves and post it. lol cheri

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 5:28:00 AM

    Very good use of words, clear and makes a profound statement

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 12:56:00 PM

    Love the wind... Your words here are so natural and in some ways wild and powerfull

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 12:48:00 PM

    I would love to read this for you any time....Roger

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 2:58:00 PM

    Beautiful my friend lovely, bravo and thank you for your commits, and yes I'm devoted to this man of mine, he can't read very well but it's ok. he is still my living inspiration although he dosesn't understand why. cheri

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:03:00 AM

    Beautifully written, my poem was about finding love, loosing it, and moving on. Yours takes out the sadness.

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/31/2013 2:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the poem is about manipulation, and grooming my next victim. ...lol well at least that is what I heard.
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 11:42:00 AM

    Wind and rain..the breeze and sandcastle..these elements arouse poignant emotions and deep thinking that when they come together are found only in this piece of yours...all senses are alive in this one...wonderful...keep a refilled ink pen nearby,k..- friend, Wendy

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:32:00 AM

    Beautiful romantic piece. I love this one also.

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:36:00 AM

    Deary Sista LINDA.. how are you.. just stop by to enjoy your great write,, thank you so much for sharing :) Much luv and lights <3 Sk

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 3:05:00 PM

    Hi Linda Just returning from a trip....jet lag and the whole bit Loved this poem of yours and so happy we are friends.......big Hugs SuZ

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 12:45:00 AM

    I deal alot with the wind and sea in my profession and you have captured everything perfectly here, your fans and friends are blessed to know you and your talent. Blessings Carl.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:15:00 PM

    Thanks a lot your so sweet and I appreciate your comment on my first acrostic. Kudos. Love and hugs. Baron Of Ebullion

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 7:41:00 AM

    A personified PD as the wind with all your special qualities! You have such a way with words. This is charm and beauty like you. I am praising you and your talent so much because this poem is pure sweetness (with a little hate). I would say (since I can be vulgar) that I feel like wind just gave me a bj :). I am chuckling too much--sorry. Anyway, you captured yourself and your beautiful attributes to a "T". I am very fond of your words as are so many people. You are beautiful.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Reassuring words; so comforting!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:47:00 AM

    The power of wind the power of words, beautiful and inspiring ..... with love....Ellie

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 7:04:00 PM

    This poem has truly captivated me. The word choice is excellent and filled with powerful emotions. Beautiful work Linda

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 11:31:00 AM

    brown eyes ditto beautiful piece of writing linda have a beautiful day talk soon

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 1:18:00 AM

    I like this a lot, to me poetry is something you read to make you see. I could see a lot here.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:53:00 PM

    Linda, this is another of your poems that leaves me astounded. you certainly catch the attentions of a massive amount of readers. best wishes.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 1:06:00 PM

    Intense, as always. It's good to hear from you. Seems like it's been a while... Jack

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 4:43:00 AM

    lovely dedication

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:32:00 AM

    That is brillianrt, actually really, really brilliant especially the last stanza, wow! Writing love poems is something I've never been good at really because I get too lost and run away with it to the point who it's written for has no idea what im saying. The imagery here is brilliant, its very clever, concise, very very beautiful...makes me think about my loved one and wish I'd written it.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:09:00 AM

    superb Linda, really is so wonderful with such a great scope of words and the great flow of them, you are a great inspiration to all and to me especially, God bless you , Gordonxx

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:54:00 AM

    "You are truly amazing Linda....you capture emotions and pen them down perfectly...thanks for the uplifting comment on my poem...take care"

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:00:00 PM

    Aloha Linda... How very true of the wind and its whispers... and realizing how out of tune we all are with these thought filled messages... yours is a blessing... and calling out to the profound power of the pen is a welcome thought... search michaelw1two to find me in the cloud... thank you for your visit to my first post... and for your invite... once I settle in I will be more apt at the rapport with my readers... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:35:00 AM

    Good evening/ morning there my dearest sis! I'm here savouring the majesty and passionate feeling of this stupendous write of yours once again. Embracing it and thank you so much. By the way, I've just read your responses on my txt this morning. Thanks a lot also for your precious time to read and leave lovely comments on my epic poem. I'm still thinking what more changes to make. Well, I hope you're well esp. after enjoying the rain. Pls. take care of yourself always ok. Big hugs! lovem4evr,Leo

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 1:50:00 AM

    I love your emotion, PD, and the positive and hypnotic nature of this poem!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:52:00 PM

    Thanks, Linda, I love this poem and I have read it several times slowly to enjoy and appreciate the deeper meaning and inner music. Very impactful, beautiful and memorable poem. Well done. have a great week ahead. Regards, Merton

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