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I Closed My Door Unto the World

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I Closed My Door Unto the World

Proud Flags of a Fool unfurled-
Fell upon Life's jagged rocks
I closed my Door unto the World,
But, alas! It has no locks!

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  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:24:00 PM
    Chan This is a uniquely creative written poem. AAAWWW you fell on sharp rocks. I fix your boo boos. LOL And buy you a lock for your door. HEE HEE Hugs Thanks for the sweet comment on my Wonderful World poem.

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    Date: 11/22/2013 4:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks for the read, Robin <3
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:15:00 AM
    Love this! The imagery rocks and the rhyme is impeccable, as usual :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/15/2013 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, love. I think it has a "Dickinson-esque" feel to it; well, the last 2 lines, anyways ;)