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Shot down

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Shot down

blazing overkill
attacking inner depths
savagely i ride
weathering 
the storm

galloping 
on the crest 
of waves
unfurling high winds
battered and torn

russian roulette
revolving
rolling in the chambers
lead heavy
spinning circles
upside down 
pulling on feelings

emotions explode
burning fire
in depths
shot through
the heart

death 
to a lovers emotion
love lives
in you died


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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 9:28:00 AM

    Well ..I went to the 1st that drew me in , after not reading for a while ..and so not Disappointed, now I understand why My Grandfather Murray tantalized my Grandmother Dempsey , so on .. many Irish names in out line ..Love Your writing !

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/15/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    YVETTE THAT IS A SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT DEEPLY APPRECIATED THANK YOU DEARLY OH YOU ARE A COLEEN DEAS
    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 9/15/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    edit "Our line "
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 4:47:00 AM

    Dynamic!!!!Totally awesome imagery!!!!! ^_^ Y.LN

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/15/2013 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for the amazing comment deeply appreciated yvette
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:34:00 PM

    wow, this is very beautiful and sad at the same time. I love the way that you have written this :) wonderful work here, liam!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/15/2013 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    destiny thank you for the sweet and very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:25:00 PM

    an explosive, powerful scene bringing me real close to your own visuals, liam... great stuff!..:) huggs

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/14/2013 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU DEEPLY WONDERFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED