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Mark My Words

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Mark My Words

Free from me, this gnawing Aggression;
To soften my Heart, concretely hard
Trampled under the Wheels of Progression-
Which have left me disfigured- scarred!

Via vox, I vow a pox,
Pour my hatred in unwav'ring Will
Mark my words, I shan't be stopped!
(But oft' my Hopes fall unfulfilled...)

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:21:00 AM
    Chan my friend These words are intense, sad, powerful, and interesting. You know how to use writing to captivate the reader and keep them intrigued. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Smack Down poem. Love and hugs Sweet Pea

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    Date: 11/27/2013 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for dropping by, Sweet Pea <3
  1. Date: 10/8/2013 4:08:00 PM
    I really like this! I love how your style seems to hold often angry or sad possessions and yet are done in a, (i want to say uplifting way. Its not quite how I mean but. . .) Their sassy almost :)

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    Date: 11/27/2013 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Jay; I appreciate your thoughtful review :)