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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:53:00 AM
    First of all, absolutely LOVE the title. This is a great piece with a hint of irony at the end. I felt like I was sweating, and I know what I would feel like if I also forgot the question. It takes skill to make the reader feel like they are right there with you. Kudos; wonderful write :)

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Just tell him to come again...

    Kithinji Avatar Gerald Kithinji
    Date: 9/23/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I mean, just hold the smile there and say 'I can't believe anyone can ask such a damn question!
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Good, I see more and more people are reading your poems. That is so well deserved for you. Thanks for reading several of mine today. you picked a few weird ones I wrote haha. now let me see a few more of yours.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 4:33:00 PM
    hello, good write.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 12:16:00 PM
    Interesting write....Love the term bated breath....Thanks for your visits to my work today. Hope you enjoyed what you read. Thanks, also for sharing your take on my poem to the contest sponsors...We all are different in the way we view things. I write to write...but a win or two is just icing in the cake...take care!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:16:00 AM
    Hi Thomas you impart so well the feelings of anticipation here I can see your audience waiting with bated breath Kudos a lovely write Shadow x smile (7)

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 9:17:00 PM
    hahaha this is cute! Thomas, i entertained.. hi, Elai is here...

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 5:06:00 PM
    btw, you got home from work to greet your dog and wife and had a beer. And then you went and ate some stuff. but all that you ate, I am not sure of!! (we have a lot of the same expressions and others were not hard to decipher)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 3:22:00 PM
    Hello Thomas, would like to read more of your poems ... but I have no patience with "drawn networks" - I enjoy reading your poems, you are skilled. - I'm on a little trip in Turkey (7 days) - Here is the internet Connection bad !!! - I want to thank you for taking the time to read several of my poems today. - There is one thing you have to explain to me. .... where you have the Norwegian language from???? - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Awe, so now you know me... Hello Thomas, once again :-)... intriguing, write... I got all caught up in the moment myself... enjoyed... Linda

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 2:48:00 AM
    i felt the nervousness but i smiled at it as well good piece thomas tina x

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:20:00 AM
    very funny, thanks for the laugh!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 7:49:00 AM
    this is really cool. Everyone waiting for your answer and you forgot the question. Priceless!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 6:40:00 PM
    Nicely written and thought out, thank you for sharing and your comments on my work

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 2:56:00 PM
    I know what this feeling is like. I have always been a shy and quiet person my entire life. Which is why I write poetry, it allows me to express myself, when I couldn't otherwise! Fantastic work!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 12:02:00 PM
    so cute, don't worry, it happens to me all the time, so go on, I'm listening, hugs xxx