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Look After My Heart - Part 1

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Look After My Heart - Part 1

I don't know the exact moment
you stole my heart.
I've only just realised it's missing.
I wont report it though as I know where it is.

All I ask is you look after it.
It's the only one I have.
And mine is very fragile.

Please don't break it

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:20:00 AM

    Thom This is a sweet and loving write. I can feel the emotion you have for this special someone. But if she breaks your heart, I will have to bring my evil side out. LOL Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Thank You poem. Hugs

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 11/6/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol, You're a sweet person Robin =)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 2:39:00 AM

    Sweet.... Nice:)

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 10/30/2013 3:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you =)
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:57:00 PM

    this must be the other piece of the heart poem I read previously! Precious!

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/22/2013 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    =D
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:57:00 PM

    just read what you said about the text message returned to you. How cool!

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/22/2013 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes it is. =) Something romantic I did.
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 6:42:00 PM

    I can so relate to these, heartfelt words, Thomas. The most fragile organ can break, if we dont handle it with loving care thanks for a lovely reminder enjoyed this poem very much ~<3~ cherie

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/21/2013 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by =)
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 3:52:00 PM

    I know exactly how you were feeling when you wrote this. It is a difficult thing to trust someone with our heart, and hope they don't break it...Excellent poem, Tom!

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/18/2013 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Kelly for taking the time to read it. =)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:17:00 AM

    OH wow, what a sweet romantic text!! Do you by any chance give lessons in romance to men who are lacking in that area? haha

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/17/2013 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol I would suggest get him to learn to write poetry! =)
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 5:46:00 AM

    excellent, glad I stopped in to your poetry ths morning, it was worth the trip to soup, love xxx

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/14/2013 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by, glad I could brighten your day
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:10:00 AM

    I originally sent this as a text message to a girl I was seeing while she was at work. My first and only real text poem! She sent a reply which became 'Reply in Love'