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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:26:00 AM
    Thom This tugged at my heartstrings. its a sad tale of someone who got lost in a lovers world with no escape, losing sight of who they are. nice job Thanks for commenting on my Images I See poem. Hugs

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 9:59:00 AM
    It takes courage to move on...Some things are easier for men than for women......culture plays a role as well. I can read from the comments that you are happy now. I'm happy for you

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:54:00 AM
    I m glad you made it to the colourful world again..Not everyone can be as strong to get out of a life where routine commitement and obligations take over heart and soul.To be abused and bullied from somebody whose main purpose to be to love you.A very profound and sentimental poem which brought tears to my eyes.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Great write, my friend. You expressed yourself extremely well...Hope you have got over, it are getting over it....Peter

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 4:17:00 PM
    I have never been married, but some of the stories that I hear about marriage makes me wonder if it's something I would ever want to do!...You are a very talented story teller and poet! Great work!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:30:00 PM
    wow, I am guessing that this too is fictional like the other prose I saw? you are so good at this kind of thing. btw, about you falling asleep at the library.Did you ever do this one? Snore so loudly as you just fell to sleep that you woke yourself up with a jolt!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:03:00 PM
    Such an honest expression of your emotions. Glad you have found freedom and keep on writing. SuZ

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 5:41:00 AM
    There is so much intensity and soul in this poem Thomas, I am honored to be the first person to comment to it, have a beautiful day, let the gentle breeze rush through your hair, and let love find you, bright, open and expectant, as a man who has never been hurt, love, peace, light xxx