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Sunlight in a Room

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Sunlight in a Room

I see a doorway to another room Direct from the room I’m currently in The room is delightful just to begin There is bright sunlight on the walls in tune I bask in the light as it is brought soon Brought in a feeling of warmth without sin Tenderness is love to all those within And that room forms the greatest magic rune This room carries love, uniquely seen sight It carry’s beauty just like robust art Now I enter this gorgeous room of light Transfixed onto the perfect summer heart I find the room is fit for the greatest It holds all the joy that’s of the latest
Russell Sivey One of my very few attempts at an Italian Sonnets.

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:49:00 AM

    Wow this is so beautiful Russell, I don't think I've written an Italian Sonnet. You did very well, this is a lovely piece. It makes me wish I were sitting in that room. Hope you're feeling better, my friend.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:37:00 PM

    I love your theme of a sunlit room, Russell. They are so much nicer than darkened or shadowy rooms. Good first Italian sonnet!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Translation: you are a treasure and a friend kisses and love for a day and a world of goodness for life, it sounds better in my mother tongue, but this is the best I could do for a translation of it, Smile!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Russell, wherever light is life blossoms. This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and love, Gail

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 12:56:00 PM

    this compoition is amazing, russell. I love the imagery, the deep feeling and thought put into it... beautifully written and very touching like a sunlight fondling.. enjoyed!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 9:53:00 AM

    Good morning Russell, a nice Italian Sonnet. beauty when light is reaching in like magic... xox...Linda

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:48:00 AM

    I'm not familiar with this form but I do like what you have written here.

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:02:00 AM

    The Italians are proud of you Russell, Sei un tesoro, mio amico, baggi e amore per l'a giornato, e un mondo di bene per la vita, xxx

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 5:45:00 AM

    Great work..Enjoyed reading this one today..It made me want to enter the sunroom and sit a spell with a blanket and coffee..Thanks for the visit to my page..I have finished "When Winter Comes"..Sara