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Solitary Confinement

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Solitary Confinement

Suck it, milk it- bleed it dry!
But leave My Heart still untouched
The Fires will rage, and they will die
While I am somber all too much...

The Temples I tread, inside my Head
Searching for a safer place
A Room to dwell outside the Hell
Of my prison's burning Gates

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  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Chan The Man I will help you pull yourself out of your prison and make you see life isn't always unhappy and trapping. Cause I am a good friend. LOL Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Love Garden poem. Huggies

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    Date: 12/9/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are indeed a good friend, Sweet Pea <3
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 5:27:00 PM
    I can really relate to the feeling of being a prisoner inside one's self. It is literally like solitary confinement, with no hope of escape. Great poem here, very deep and soulful, nicely done!

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    Date: 9/23/2013 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Kelly. I'm happy my words were able to properly convey that sentiment. I appreciate the kind words and always look forward to your reviews :)
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 4:07:00 AM
    Hope you ind that place. x

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    Date: 9/14/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me, too. Thanks for the read and review, Louise :)