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Piercing the Night

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Piercing the Night

Moonlight softly touches me with its glimmer
Glowing gently, waking me from my slumber
Thoughts of him start piercing me in the darkness
Memories take me 

Floating on the fog between real and dreaming 
Feelings come I thought were in past existence
Wishing on a star in the silent distance
Wanting him near me 


© Rebecca L ~ September, 2013

2nd place in Craig’s “Night” contest   

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  1. Date: 12/9/2013 2:40:00 AM

    Becca, you have such a poetic excellence! Your heart is a treasure chest of beauty waiting to be written! Piercing the Night pierced my heart! chuck

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 9:01:00 PM

    Congratulations, a well deserved win!

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 9:21:00 AM

    I'm back to read this one again. I really like the form although I've never tried it myself. Congratulations on your well deserved win

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:51:00 AM

    I stumbled over this meter.......you made it look easy with the beauty and flow of your poem !! Great work, Becca!

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 6:15:00 PM

    becca this is beautiful...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Congratulations, Becca. Romantic thoughts indeed of an absent lover... Night is the hardest time for say those in the military. Hope that is not your case.

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Very well written. Congrats on a beautiful poem and a great win! G.

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:36:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Becca

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:56:00 PM

    Becca!! ;D---great job on this difficult form!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:51:00 AM

    I really enjoyed the beauty and romance in this write. Great work...

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 1:46:00 AM

    Truly lovely Becca.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:02:00 AM

    I feel the longing in this piece Becca. You captured it oh so well.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Hi Becca, A most charming and romantic write..I seem to come alive at night as well..Guess I'm a night owl..lol Nicely done.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:25:00 PM

    You dear are on a short list of the get it done right entries!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:54:00 PM

    Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:50:00 PM

    I like this one very much. ~Soup Mail~

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 10:03:00 PM

    You are the best!!! What a powerful pen you have! Hugs.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:06:00 PM

    Touching heart with yearn and beauty...lovely sweet lady

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 2:35:00 PM

    PENNED REALLY VERY BEAUTIFULLY FLOATING ON A FOG EXCELLENT

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Elegant flow with a pleasant dreamy feel. Nice ! :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:04:00 AM

    i'm just starstruck with how you swayed with this one becca... i go dreamy!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:59:00 PM

    Keep wishing on that star Becca, dreams can come true, Beautiful write, Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:27:00 PM

    so hauntingly lovely great pen Shadow x smiles

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/14/2013 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Shadow, smiles back to you :)
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 9:17:00 AM

    beautiful write Becca.... best wishes in the contest

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/14/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joseph!
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:30:00 AM

    I love the softness of this one, the romantic longing. Beautiful work

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/14/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Thomas :) :)
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:19:00 AM

    Becca...thanks for visiting! My latest post shares your theme! Really cold breeze tonite here in Minnesota! Brings strange voices with it! Happens every year...first cold wind ushers winter warnings! This write of yours is wonderful! Jimbo

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/14/2013 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for writing Jimbo, always good to hear from you!
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:55:00 PM

    wow!good form of poetry you write here and gently express your love for him.well done....good luck into the contest.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/13/2013 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was a new form for me :) Thank you Litan :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:10:00 PM

    Simply beautiful!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/13/2013 10:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Arthur :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 12:27:00 PM

    This is a very beautiful and dreamy write my friend! This has deep thoughts of him, desiring him near is quite the want of yours Becca! You have delighted me by the splendor of this amazing poem here this afternoon! What a pleasant piece, Great Work!!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/13/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol Yes desiring him is my inspiration. I'm not so good at being alone. Thank you Russell, you're always very kind. :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Cecilia said it well. Excellent poem.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 9/13/2013 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jon! :)
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