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Hunger

desire becomes
the heart's need
passion it breathes
hungering
in embers

flames sparking words
relights ablaze
burning red
from the mirror
of one's soul
touching smiles

happiness 
a dream
forever beautiful
igniting in the deep
embers burning
wild feelings

food of love
melting softness
eternal desire
a second heartbeat
feeding the fire
deep burning flames

a temperature rises
burning red passion
relights 
a single rose
blooms
in these ashes

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:10:00 AM
    A single rose blooms in these ashes~I love this verse so much.Your words above describe love and lust as in one unity.Scarlet petals bleed passion~Wow

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/14/2013 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HI AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT CHARMAINE HOPE YOU HAD A WONDERFUL DAY YESTERDAY THANK YOU KINDLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Hey Liam, The red rose of love shines in this one.. Regards, Ken

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU KEN FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED MY FRIEND
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 3:47:00 PM
    A very passionate read liam irish do have a lot of it tina :)

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HA HA TINA THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENT KINDLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:45:00 PM
    You're the romantics of all antics, all that's chivalrous and old, yet you are young at heart, what else can a girl want, beautiful Liam never lose that tender heart, it's the stuff of dreams, the down in pillows, that makes us comfort sleep, huggies for you and no not the diaper kind either lol xxx

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HA HA YOU GOT ME SMILING SO SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL I THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED BEAUTIFUL COMMENT
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:09:00 PM
    Just like roses, our hearts need the warmth of love to help them grow! We hunger for love like we hunger for air and water, it's something we can't live without...A deeply expressive and beautiful poem. Nicely written! I really enjoyed reading this one!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:34:00 AM
    VERY passionate piece. Yes, hunger can be very demanding...you captured that essence well, Liam..Cheers

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH EILEEN BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED