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middle earth

a world 
shatters in pieces
then breaks
everything inside
emotions strength
to carry on

slowly the pieces
they come together
hidden to be found
fragile feelings
walking a path
one of tears

softly moaning
broken hearted
i walked 
through hell
couldn't find you

just waiting
that one special
someone who will
fix it again
only to walk
away to be followed

i cried
no one 
to wipe 
the tears i left
love cold 
lonely nights

no one to share
the pillow
look at the moon shine
beautiful light
with shadows
silver reflections

mixed with darkness
in the soup 
of night
looking upon stars
a million 
miles away

thinking
to one self
is all this 
just a dream
are they the souls
of the lost

dealt a bad hand
the chips are down
wandering the universe
asking why
looking to the stars
for answers

in lost direction
whispering gently
sometimes one cries
all alone
in shattered
dreams


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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:43:00 PM
    So sad bud, well I will not buss your chops again man in tights....lol.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/15/2013 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YOU ARE OWNING UP TO THE TIGHTS HA HA ANNOUNCEMENT BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED PETER HA HA HA
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 11:21:00 AM
    Very touching... You have a tremendous gift to write.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/14/2013 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU DEEPLY WONDERFUL COMMENT KINDLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 12:47:00 PM
    I really felt the emotion in this poem, deep in my heart and my soul, because I have been there. In fact, I am still there! So just know that you are not alone in feeling this way...I am adding this poem to my favorites! I loved it! A very beautiful and heartfelt piece!...Thank you for the kind comments, hope you have a beautiful day, too!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU KELLY FOR THE WONDERFUL HEARTFELT COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 4:55:00 AM
    No one to share the pillow with-look at the moon shine beautiful light/with shadows/ silver reflection-This is besutiful sad yet beautiful and hopeful.Rather share the pillow with just moon shadows then with a person who doesn t treat your heart the way it deserves..Excellent soul beating poem .

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/13/2013 5:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    quack e day do leaping over the moon i shout beautiful comment as the soul is one with the stars thank you dearly charmaine heartfelt appreciated