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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Fell the pain and sorrow. I do fell love is a fairytale because it takes a lot to fall in love and someone to fall in love with you

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Was just reading what you wrote me under my comment. Good thing I come back sometimes to visit these poems or I would not know what you had said!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:48:00 PM
    words of sorrow, hurt and loneliness. Each line brings the reader more and more tears. Nicely done

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 4:59:00 PM
    Profoundly sad and sincere poetry. I would say "Passion and romance" are the fairy tales. Real love is what we end up with when we weather all the storms and passion is replaced by trust and familiarity. since most are not able to settle for less than passionate love, they often call it quits or move on to someone else. Such a shame.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 4:30:00 PM
    I can relate to this completely! I especially can feel the line, "A shattered heart and torn life takes a longtime to heal." I felt like I was reading one of my own poems. This was very deep and sorrowful, and I think I must add it to my favorites! Really great work, Tom!...Thank you once again for your kind comments. They are much appreciated!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:07:00 AM
    Trust an ugly bitter world / love is a fairytale - So emotional and deep this is..a scar which bleeds and never heals.Powerful indeed.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:26:00 PM