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  1. Date: 10/28/2013 2:53:00 PM
    A deeply emotional and dramatic poem. I loved the final two lines, and the vivid imagery. Excellent writing, Tom!...Thank you for the nice comments.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 11:12:00 PM
    Thom This is a very thought provoking poem. Full of emotion and intensity. nice job

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Hello Thomas, todays another day... love the meaning in your poem... rasping noise of a secret held from the night before. <--- I like that line.. gives it an echo-ey feeling... beautiful & deep... Linda