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Slow Progress

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Slow Progress

Glowing with realization, 
I come to find that I fall prey to my comfort zone 
I'm growing and changing as long days pass me by
When will my growth process just slow down?

Forlorning with no gratification,
 I come to find that I have a long way to go 
My progress is as slow pace as a snail,
Running with the hare...I beg to know
Your truth, oh God

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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 6:50:00 PM
    DAVID, good to read something of yours. You do ask a difficult question! Many of us at an old age have come to believe that there may not be an answer. So we try to make the best of every day as that is all we can do.