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  1. Date: 9/19/2013 1:03:00 PM
    ohh, cyn.. you're back!.. i can relate, sweets; my mom passed on years back and it was her birthday last sept 17... this is a compelling write, so touching and personal.. how are you?.. sent you a soupy weeks ago.. take care and miss ya lots!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Cyndi a very moving write, the format is very well thought out as it slowly drifts along with the theme, very well done and nice to read your work again...David

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:56:00 AM
    A true and wonderful keening, maybe you can write a eulogy? [ I smiled at your comment on LIPPING ..well..LOL... I had to use something other than kissing! and I liked it! I am always surprised when people like verses which were come by so effortlessly? & I was actually denying the topic /nod/] I miss YOU! But I have had a blast of a summer all do to YOU telling me to stop writing and go enjoy summer! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOOOOOOOOOOO

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Cyndi, really sorry about what you and your family are going through. you will all be in my prayers... Could not have put the feelings more intensely than this.!! Jag

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:19:00 PM
    This is so intense, so thick with the unspeakable.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:27:00 AM
    - Grief is painful to bear .... a touching and well written poem, with strong feelings Cynthia ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:53:00 PM
    Yes, They will be in my prayers and fervently hope you to come out this sad situation.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:36:00 PM
    oh my, your poor niece and family, Cynthia. Out of tragedy is born a beautiful poem of such depth. I'm sorry for what is happening to your brother. Is this why we have not seen you blogging much lately? So sorry and for that same loss of your mother.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:03:00 PM
    An incredible write, Cyndi! So sad to lose a loved one especially a parent. Will pray for your brother's painless passing and strength and comfort for your family. Love, Kim