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sandstorm on the beach

The wind sweeps quickly along the quiet beach
 peaceful and calm 
Before the rain comes crashing
Lightening and thunder follow 
the water capturing it's glow
As I watch from my hole in the wall cabin
Feeling it shift from one end to the other 
watching the magic of the storm in amazement
As dry sand granules dodge the storm
And flutter wildly in the wind
 escaping their fate
 till the next big sandstorm



Karen croft
9-12-13
Build your own sand!

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  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:12:00 PM
    Karen, this is a nice winning poem..Linda

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Nice approach...:-) ....congratulations

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Congrats Karen on a job well done xxx

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Creative thought. I never that about each grain of sand and its fate. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:20:00 AM
    Hello Karen hope you had that smile for your daughter again . Lovely poem ...Seren

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:23:00 AM
    I can almost see it unfolding through your words...well done ...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:17:00 AM
    I love the line of the sand dodging the storm !! What a lovely winning poem ! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:57:00 AM
    Your superb poem gives me a vicarious experience of the sandstorm my dear friend Karen. Thank you so much for sharing and my big hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:33:00 AM
    the vision you impart is one of great beauty Karen congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:55:00 AM
    You made me feel like I was there. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 6:28:00 AM
    Really enjoyed your take on this contest Karen! Congrats

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:24:00 AM
    - A well written poem for the contest - good luck Karen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)