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dragon breath

Intoxicating beautiful
caressing in
one's mind
as the hair
falls down
upon
the shoulders

brings forth
within a burning warmth
the dragon
darkhorse 
from hell

in sparkling eyes
a soul burning
fuel upon fire
breathing in
the passion 
of breath

each exhaled
consumed 
within another
hot flames
burning emotions
deep within yearning

lingering on 
the lips
soft petals
of burning hot
desire

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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:48:00 PM

    nice love song ;}

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/15/2013 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU KINDLY DEBBIE DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:41:00 PM

    This one exudes with passion. Well done!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/15/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU MY DEAR FRIEND DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/14/2013 11:18:00 AM

    Love the imagery and how you develop this piece.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/14/2013 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 4:14:00 PM

    dark horse lol you are a good poet and very mysteriously passionate writer this one caught my eye straight away tina x

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/13/2013 9:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU TINA YEAH THATS WHAT I AM KNOWN AS HA HA WONDERFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED I THANK YOU KINDLY
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:06:00 PM

    Yes, this one is HOT and also very COOL imagery!!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/13/2013 3:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ANDREA THANK YOU EVER SO KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 7:04:00 PM

    Hot like lava, sweet like java, enjoyed your poem Liam xxx

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/13/2013 3:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    AMAZING COMMENT I THANK YOU KINDLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 6:09:00 PM

    Hey buddy, Another great romantic write from you..Keep the dream alive my friend. Ken

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/13/2013 3:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU MY FRIEND FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT APPRECIATED DEEPLY
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:39:00 PM

    You give desire a very pulling heated power--- awesome verse once again my friend! Always, Laura

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/13/2013 3:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LAURA THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 3:41:00 PM

    Sizzling ..ardently beautiful..oozing with sensuality..Charma

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/12/2013 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I THANK YOU DEEPLY CHARMAINE APPRECIATED IN ITS BEAUTY
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:23:00 PM

    Oh my....This is HOT!!! Lovely.....Simply lovely...

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/12/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU EILEEN DEEPLY APPRECIATED BEAUTIFUL COMMENT
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Very nice writing Dear fellow Poet, I enjoyed reading you today!! Nice one!!! Best Regards, Cindy

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/12/2013 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU KINDLY CINDY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Dragons...heat...passion, AWESOME! I love me some dragons. I enjoyed the boldness of this piece.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/12/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH DRAKE EVER SO BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED