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Sandstorm

You came  into my life
My Tuareg of the desert
Brought to me by the winds of fate
To fill the emptiness within

Nature played her part, bringing us together
Raising a sandstorm shielding us from others eyes

Just as the wind causes the sand to vibrate
So my body mirrors this feeling
When you touch my skin, to kiss me with longing
This dervish of emptiness begone.

Leaving grains of sand of desire 
the priceless pearl of hope.


Penned 11 September 2013 by Seren Roberts

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  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:11:00 PM
    nice winning poem...Linda

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/22/2013 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Congratulations

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 10:06:00 AM
    Fantastic, you made swirling raging sand into a romantic cocoon.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Monterey ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:41:00 PM
    A very emotive write Seren, congrats on your winning poem,xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hello rose thank you for your words ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Beautiful sandstorm.. Congrats on your win. Betty

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Betty....Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 12:58:00 PM
    I love how this ended on a positive not. Congratulations on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Marlon...Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:32:00 AM
    wow, this is beautiful! Congrats on your win :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your congrats ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:27:00 AM
    Wow Seren......this is lovely!! This dervish of emptiness begone." Wow........this gives one the quivers.....it is so beautiful !! Congratulations!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie, foir your comment and your congrats ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Wow! A superb write my dear friend Seren. Thank you so much for this outstanding write of yours. So love it and i enjoyed reading it tonight. Many hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Leonora thanks for your lovely comment and congrats ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:58:00 AM
    the priceless pearl of hope. Seren all you wrote is embedded in this last line congrats on win Shadow x smile

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Shadow.....Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Beautiful!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard .....Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 6:36:00 AM
    I love the feel of this poem Seren. Congrats on your placement

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/20/2013 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craig ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:31:00 PM
    You brought the sands of beauty to my eyes. Lovely work Seren.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/15/2013 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mustapha .....Seren
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 6:12:00 AM
    Your "sand" is beautiful Seren. I wish you the best in the contest. :) G.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/15/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Giorgio ....Seren
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 4:53:00 PM
    This is First Place all the way. This is one of my favs, a wonderful write!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/15/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ...Seren
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:13:00 AM
    Nice expressions on desire and romance, good luck

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:16:00 AM
    A beautiful poem with the realities of life.Its desires..loss and hope...Awesome especially your last two lines Serena.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carmaine....Seren
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:06:00 AM
    Beautiful write Seren! I love the fantastic way you've used 'sand' to weave a lovely story. Very nicely done.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:37:00 PM
    I love how you brought up the pearl, the pearl of hope which comes from a grain of sand! That was a great symbol, a wonderful metaphor! This write is tremendous, I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have surely written one of your best ones with this piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank ou Russell......Seren