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Watch Your Step

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Watch Your Step

I thought it odd, this parallel
'Tween what is couth, and what is feral
But sings the Herald, my steps in peril-
Considered, I, that all was well...

I know this path is dangerous,
Upset that Life is merely heinous 
When all I want is to be Famous,
So ends this tragic tale!

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  1. Date: 1/18/2014 9:34:00 PM
    Chan The Man What a powerful write about life and the struggles we face everyday to survive and get through. Nicely done my friend. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Demise poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 1/19/2014 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for another review, Sweet Pea <3
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 6:34:00 PM
    Perfect!!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/13/2013 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again, Ryan :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:30:00 PM
    So true! I think this is what every poet here wants, I know I do!...A very honest and dramatic poem! Nicely done!...Thank you so much for reading and commenting kindly on my poems. I really appreciate all of them!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 9/21/2013 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I loved Savage Garden!
    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/12/2013 4:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Kelly, you are quite talented and deserve to have your work lauded. Thank you, truly, madly, deeply (to quote that old Savage garden song lol). I am humbled by your reviews of my work :)
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:41:00 PM
    The struggles and conflicts of life told in a fantastic Shakespearean tale :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/12/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm all about some drama LOL! Thanks, hon <3