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An Uninvited Guest

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An Uninvited Guest

Sorrow falls through weary walls-
As uninvited feelings mix...
When Complication comes to call
(Brings with it Woe that can't be fixed!)
I will strain to entertain
What Fate the Gods bestow
For I cannot live without the pain
That's buried deep within my Soul

*Heart and Soul Contest Entry

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  1. Date: 3/19/2014 4:19:00 PM
    Hi Chan, WOW! That's real deep, and how you fell permanently. . Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 3/20/2014 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, hon. Much appreciated as always :)
  1. Date: 3/19/2014 10:14:00 AM
    as soulful as it can get, chan.. my sweet on your greeat win... huggs!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 3/19/2014 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwww, shucks, Nette; now I'm blushing lol. Thanks so much, hon <3 :)
  1. Date: 3/19/2014 1:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, JTAP

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 3/19/2014 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, Doc! :)
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 10:14:00 PM
    Hi Chan, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 3/19/2014 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate it so much, Skat; thank you :)
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 9:24:00 PM
    Wow! Just read it twice.. It's really really good.. Congrats!!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 3/19/2014 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the kind words, Dave :)
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 5:20:00 PM
    "For I cannot live without the pain/ That's buried deep within my Soul" Such terrific ending lines, Archaic! Kudos on having this poem on the winner's list! Ruben.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 3/19/2014 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, my friend; I am sincerely grateful :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 4:41:00 AM
    Congrats on the win , JTAP

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 11/9/2013 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks as always, Doc! :)
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 9:01:00 PM
    JTAP, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 11/9/2013 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for hosting and letting me know, SKAT :)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Archaic, this is a powerful write. Full of feeling and depth. You allow the reader to really feel the pain buried inside. nice job

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/26/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's a lovely thing for you to say, Robin; I appreciate it so very much. Thank you for your read and review! :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:33:00 PM
    "I cannot live without the pain, That's buried deep within my soul", I know what that feels like! Awesome line! Great flow to your words here, and I love the rhymes, too!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/12/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so very much, truly. Your review makes me terribly happy :)
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:44:00 PM
    You're the master of poetic substance. When your poetry is on the page there is nothing else in the room. In awe :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/12/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, hon. I actually made a goof in the last line when you first read it and didn't catch it until I reread it. Last line should have said, "That's buried deep within my Soul". When you read it, it read "buried deep with my Soul" and I was like, Oh, no! lol