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Looking to the Heavens

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Looking to the Heavens

Just a victim of the system,
And left Star incensed
Effervescent Moon of crescent
Comets crashing, craters hence
Planets positions, Sun's collision
Constellations form a Sign
And give me such a clearer vision-
A heightened sense of Mind

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Chan This is unique and gets the reader thinking about the message you are trying to capture in these words. But don't make me think too much. My mind will shut down. LOL Thanks for the sweet and caring comment on my Staying And Repaying poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

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    Date: 11/27/2013 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol thanks for the review, Sweet Pea <3
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:37:00 PM
    Just beautiful! This poem gives the reader much to ponder. Amazing flow to your words, once again! Nicely done!

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    Date: 9/12/2013 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Again, a mere "thank you" is insufficient to articulate my appreciation of your review. It warms my heart :)