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I Can't Go On Like This

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I Can't Go On Like This

Take me to my Halcyon,
The place where all my grief is gone
While I'm unsure if Peace is pure-
When all I do is wrong!

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 8:03:00 AM
    strong and powerful words. Thought provoking and honest. nice job

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/25/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Robin; I appreciate that. Thanks for taking time to read and review :)
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Your poetry sure isnt wrong!BG

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    Date: 9/11/2013 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks, Barbara :)