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loneliness

Loneliness requires self pity
A sorrow that sits on a throne
We pay homage to that pity
That screems at us"Alone!"
Perhaps we've been deserted
The worst alone of all
Perhaps we've been disguarded
And our hero's just moved on
Perhaps the years took away
Our peers one by one
Perhaps death was unwilling
To give another sun
Perhaps a promise was believed
And yet no one has come

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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Age and loneliness can go hand in hand if one lets that happen..One of your better works..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:56:00 AM
    John, I really like this one! I think you did the theme very well.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 11:22:00 AM
    - So touching, John. - Well done- Luck in contest! - Have a nice Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Such strength in its sadness. This was so strongly done. Those last two lines gave me some chills. Wonderful job!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:42:00 AM
    You are correct in saying loneliness requires self pity, John

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:36:00 PM
    This is very well written. Loneliness is a very sad word and yet a lot of people live their lives like that. I know - I am one of those people, but I don't ask for pity. I try to keep myself busy. It is not good to live alone, but sometimes we have no choice. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla