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  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Both passion and patience shine brightly in your writes Dannyboy. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Danny; Everything you write fits perfect. I know all about patience - passion, you have to love something or someone to have it. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:24:00 PM
    Indeed a passionate write, Dan. Some very powerful lines in here. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:10:00 AM
    Thanks for the entry

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:16:00 PM
    I believe both are needed if we are to find the balance in our lives, you've expressed it well with your well chosen words Dan, love xxx

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 6:36:00 PM
    Great write Dan...Seren

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:41:00 PM
    I think this is a poem that every poet here can relate to. And if they can't then there is something wrong. Passion and patience are two very important ingredients in the writing of great poetry! And, you have got a great one here! Nicely done!...Thank you for the nice comments on my work!

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:16:00 PM
    Very nice..enjoyed it so much. BG

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 2:26:00 PM
    - I know you're sensitive and caring person, Dan .... but singing it was surprising .... can you sing? - A enjoyable poem to read my f.e.f. ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry no one can hear you........
    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 9/11/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ha-ha.... I have a very deep voice. So I like to sing the lows as low as they can go. :o) f.e.f // xoxo