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Awakening

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Awakening

kissing breathes 
upon the darkness
bound and chained
i bled
gagged in silent words
drowning

sinking deep
into the underworld
eating from 
the insides out
a black widow
as the skin crawls

in poisoned
dark feelings
mine eyes draped
heavy curtains
within pain
gloom swallows
deep within

silver shadows dancing
gripping upon 
one's soul
screeching out
fire and brimstone
scorching 
in the depths

looking from the dark
i see light
in a charge
opening one's eyes
were have i been

staring directly
angel of light
i have just been
to hell
my awakening 
brightly called

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:38:00 AM
    Deep and poignant.. a very interesting read.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    BINDU THANK YOU DEEPLY GREATLY APPRECIATED LOVELY COMMENT
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:30:00 AM
    Excellent write Liam - the shroud of darkness tends to envelop our senses and only light can lead to awakening. Very well penned.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT VICKY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:23:00 AM
    Go to the light. Always to the light!!! I enjoyed this one. It's wondrous to emerge from such darkness.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU IT IS SHINING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 6:35:00 PM
    I could so see 9/11 and the feelings many felt on that day with this poem...great write, the emotion and images are very well penned! hugs

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU SANDRA FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Great write, my friend very moving and sad..Thanks for the read Liam...Peter

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU PETER FOR THE AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 2:06:00 PM
    Hey buddy, A lovely and moving write my friend.. Ken

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 3:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    KEN MY OLD PAL I THANK YOU DEARLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 1:19:00 PM
    This poem transmits a sad emotion..but I love the turn in the end..An angel of light lifting your spirit..A very beautiful ending of hope..Hey dnt stay in the underworld..angels hate using goggles and diving..Big smile.I hope poetry will be a great healer to a still open wound and may all the angels take care of you day and night.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OH I HAVE BEEN WRITING FOR YEARS CHARMAINE THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Reads like a very bad dream whether a night dream or a day dream..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work ...Your comment was uplifting..Sara

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THATS HOW THE NIGHTMARE FELT AT THE TIME BEAUTIFUL COMMENT I THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 12:13:00 PM
    A very deep and powerful poem. Sometimes life and love can make us feel like we have just gone through the torture of hell...Excellent piece of writing, Liam!...You might want to read my poem, "Echo"....Thank you for the encouraging comments. They really mean a lot to me!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU KELLY EXCELLENTLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 11:13:00 AM
    A deep pondering, kind of like all of those tangled thoughts one might have in times of reflection.. well done, liam... hope to read you again!.. thanks for dropping by! :) huggs

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated