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  1. Date: 2/5/2014 3:52:00 PM
    soupmail for ya

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 5:00:00 AM
    Such a massive piece and very well written. I've always loved reading your narratives. Keep up the fabulous work. A very touching and meaningful experience. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 5:12:00 PM
    Nothing more sweet when you make a parent proud....terrific write from the heart Caleb. Hugs

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Caleb, ditto Andie!!! WHERE ARE YOU?

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Caleb, where are yOU??

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:57:00 PM
    been a while, caleb...what's next?..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 11:40:00 PM
    really fantastic write , enjoyed it fully .. kudos to you , Celeb ..

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:23:00 AM
    A very deep and creative work of art. Nicely penned.wow! You teach me how to haunt someday(laughs). So sad u lost your dad. Kudos. Wishing you the best of luck. Hugs and love

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Death has snatched so many their beloved. A wonderful write and well penned my dear friend and do visit some of works if you care. Here is a site you can use to generate income,its real and I guarantee you will love it just click on the link,when u hv registered,you go to the other one. Its business link. http://Fun4Days.Com/?share=199457. http://Fun4Days.com/sms/sms.php?share=199457. Have a lovely venture. Love, Bob.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 12:12:00 AM
    wow, I thought I had read all your Black Woods stories but I had missed this last one, and I love how it ended with tangled vines, like my own poem refers to!! It's very interesting how we all have our own little cultures within the bigger culture of being americans. It is admirable, Caleb, because one day we could very well be back to having to be hunters of our own food again. I can see a future where it is possible!! soupmail.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:56:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your experiences. What State/City is this? I really enjoyed this glimpse of life in the days when men taught their boys / girls the basics of survival. For me, I fished and hunted with my dad, uncles and boy cousins. I was the only girl!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:45:00 PM
    a winding journey filled with a gamut of experiences a young boy will always remember... short story becomes you, caleb... thrilled to have read this dad-son connection..) huggs

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Made sure I read the intro first before coming here....WOW...what a significant experience....That was the day your father saw the man in you! I can see why this is etched so deeply in your memory, my dear. A beautiful write from a beautiful soul...

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:09:00 AM
    This part of your childhood makes me think of my own childhood.I guess its every child dream to make their parents proud.It seems the black lake woods still haunt you with beautiful memories shared with your dad and the dissapearing of the b.l.forest is like stealing part of your childhood away.Sweet sad nostalgia.You re a great story teller Caleb..Enjoyed your read.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Caleb....an amazing story of self discovery and accomplishment...I think some of us were simply born in the wrong century...but then again...I'm glad we are here to pass it on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!