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for lost in the day and the sounds of the sun
with hands in the air and feelings undone
as life in the sands and the pouring of fear
of love and of death, it fails with a cheer

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  1. Date: 9/22/2013 4:41:00 PM
    this is very insightful and deep. Lots of thought and feeling. nice job

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/22/2013 7:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You! It just came out one day...
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:21:00 PM
    - Proficient and deeply written, Samuel !!! ..... (the sun will always rise again) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/16/2013 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Awesome piece; I love your work, Samuel. I disagree with Mr. Thornton; I like that you began with "for"; it adds a little something special for me :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/12/2013 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree :)
    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It keeps the meter for the first and 3 lines balanced ;)
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:35:00 AM
    Good morning Samuel, somehow I feel as if the mirage was an okay natural view. Nice way of placing a displaced image of distant through your poem...Linda

    Robinson Avatar Samuel Robinson
    Date: 9/11/2013 8:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It was a disconnected verse that I really liked, the title brought it together a described it just right!