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Treasured emotion

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Treasured emotion

a wounded sparrow
on one wing
tears dripping blood
on the canvas
fear
a ghost

twisted out of shape
emotionally 
within feelings
warm ice 
cutting cold

penned from the deepest
inkwell
in darkness lurks
like a vampire
paper soaks up
releasing the ache

burning in the dungeons
absorbing pain
a wounded heart
enveloped by 
one's soul
aching emotion

cries a river
as the sun smiles
from the stories told
i see the light
in the cold stare
blue ice clear

the moon upside down
digging into
the depths of hell
in the mourning
a battle began
emotions
in turmoil

landing on the crossroads
upside down
in this world
light of angels 
appeared
drawing on the sands

marking a cross
in a sun kissed mist
i stand in the middle
direction not found
what a future holds
no bonds
kind to the soul

plans cannot be made
a road has not been chosen
safely i stand
in the sunlight
at the junction
awaiting to walk

enchanting hearts
with dreams
within a gift
to heaven
a golden key
to love 
a treasure

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:42:00 AM

    A beauty of a poem!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/12/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 12:20:00 PM

    I wish that life came with a road map to show us where we should go. Then many of us wouldn't be so lost!...I loved this poem! And, I loved the interesting imagery. Fantastic poem!...Please, read my poem "Lost And Found", it is very similar to this.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/11/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WE STILL WOULD NOT BE HAPPY RULES HA HA WONDERFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:41:00 AM

    This journey, though taken in painful steps, was a beautiful one. Your ending astounds! I REALLY like how this journey reached culmination. Great write!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/11/2013 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ASTOUNDING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT MOVED THE EARTH THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:35:00 AM

    I love the expression (the moon upside down)..I love it alot.Imtriguing poem woth unanswered questions..Roads to be walked .decisions to be made.Pick the highway to the sky..There the celestiene sky cast soft glows of sun lit beams..

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/11/2013 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    QUACK QUACK HOPE THE DAY IS BEAUTIFUL CLOUDS IN THE SKY I SEE THE SUN WHEN IT SMILES BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:10:00 AM

    This a beauty of a poem to read this morning and start my day. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid Date: 9/11/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU DEEPLY LUCILLA VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED