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  1. Date: 10/28/2013 2:57:00 PM
    There is much to ponder in this poem. But, I can tell you, that I always write and read poems with my heart. It is the only way to do it, in my opinion! Wonderful work, Tom, as always! :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Thom This is a creative, unique and interesting write. Filled with questions and only one answer. A poem is what comes from the writers heart. It is what we feel and see. It doesn't matter what others think. Nice job

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Absolutely blown away by this piece. I DO see what you feel and feel what you see. The title is perfect and I loved that you began this poem with a compelling question. Fantastic write; going into my "faves" :)

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    Date: 10/5/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think you definitely stuck it to him; good job. You're right: sometimes a poem IS just a poem, and sometimes a poem is completely direct, without any "hidden" meaning. I've written plenty of pieces where the meaning is made plain, palpable and easy to discern. Nothing hidden; totally exposed :)
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 12:52:00 AM
    I see what you mean. I like it.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:58:00 AM
    lol, I think Ink and words flow through the blood... filling your mind, and heart with words....xox...Linda