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Beating love

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Beating love

Blossoming 
In the inner depths 
Like a flower 
warm touching emotions 
Dressed in dark 

Glowing 
in the embers 
A loving devotion 
Sparking in dreams 
Not being able 
To do without 

In the clouds 
A gentle sigh 
Within feelings 
At one with 
the silver lining 
Shines beauty 

Lifting the curtains 
Sparkling emotions 
A dazzling jewel 
Smiling happiness 
Raising the spirit 
To the highest 

A whisper falls 
upon the breath 
The soul sings out 
Fluttering 
In it's breeze 
Gives wings 

Love you take 
The very breath away 
The heart flies 
In the spirit 
of you 
Without wings 

Floating heartbeats 
Banging on the drums 
Within emotions 
For you 
my dream 

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:46:00 AM
    My fav line - " a whisper falls upon the breath" - a very lovely poem!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/12/2013 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    bindu thank you dearly very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:56:00 PM
    A girls dream a man who knows emotion and expresses so well good job

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/12/2013 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you madelin for the beautiful dream comment deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 2:37:00 PM
    "Blossoming in the inner depths like a flower warm touching emotions dressed in dark"... I feel like that verse describes me perfectly!... I loved reading this wonderful poem. I am adding it to my favorites!...Thank you for the beautiful comments, as always!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THE BEAUTY IS IN THE COMMENT I THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:28:00 AM
    I was going to pick some of my favourite verses here..but I can`t cause i love them.all..Beautiful the soul which flutters without wings.It feels like magic

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/11/2013 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THE MAGIC IS THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT FLUTTERING OF THE PAGE LIKE A BUTTERFLY I THANK YOU DEARLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED