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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 10:41:00 PM
    Thom This is a scary and creepy write. You captivate the reader in a fun and eerie way. I have enough trouble sleeping (insomnia) and this write doesn't help. LOL Hugs Thanks for the sweet comment on my Holiday Cheer poem

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 12:01:00 AM
    GOOD one for halloween. Hope you have entered it in one of those halloween contests.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Totally agree with Kelly. Clever write; enjoyed it very much. Kudos, my friend! :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:56:00 PM
    I loved this very suspenseful poem! And, I especially love the last line, it allows the reader to use their imagination about what is coming next! Excellent poem, Thomas! I enjoyed it very much! I have a poem that is very similar to this, but I have not posted it yet. It is titled, "You Know Something Is There".