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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:49:00 PM

    This my friend is a real treasure of a poem. one that should be kept close to the heart. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 12:58:00 PM

    A full Prescription...For what ails ...the growing pains...of TRUE love...Tenderly...ad beautifully Expressed! I'm So 'IMPRESSED'!

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Love it. Feeling every line. I was swept away on the wings of an imagery in my mind. Soothe and breathtaking. Thank you

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:48:00 PM

    A very impressive detail poem

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 8:14:00 AM

    what happen to last nights poem... xox..mail........ .Linda

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:18:00 AM

    I will fav this, whence this comes from, I'm as certain as the fact that the angels are busy weaving your red carpet, for your silver tomorrows, you bring nothing but goodness into my life, by your deep and cutting edge poetry, Scribe, you are the salt of poetry soup, I'm blessed to read your work, this is going to be a great day, all my love I pour unto you, bro, I love you xxx

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/14/2013 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We supposed to be poets, and I can't think of anything to say. This comment is that huge and moving. Thank You and I Most Definitely Love You Back! Wow wow wow!
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:31:00 PM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 4:59:00 AM

    Yes indeed Scribe!...Loving fearlessly is the true key, leaving no room for the petty, evil emotions that would destroy it...Enjoyed this baby to the max sir - Tim

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/14/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mr. Ryerson! Fearless is the threshold to a real love, just as you Dorado about the evils that will come in this imperfect world!
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:34:00 AM

    - A poem that makes me happy .. - Sensitive, soft and beautiful .. Your soul glows through. - Wish you a nice weekend, Marlon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/14/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have to keep the Soup Angel happy. Thank you for being the light within our house, Anne Lise!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 11:43:00 PM

    Wow! What can I say, that hasn't already been said. This is ... amazing. "I can be the magician with the healing hands" ... "for the first time you can let weak, rest"... wow. Putting this in favorites.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/14/2013 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Lady! It's an attempt to open up!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:19:00 PM

    another PS... I'm storming your poem up with comments... LOL :-) Luv Linda

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:17:00 PM

    PS...love the feeling and magic that ran across my mind after reading your poem. a sweet sensation, and feeling when cradled with security... always a Fan... xox..Linda

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Linda! It's a mutual fanship!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:14:00 PM

    wait wait! I have more... But, like I said,,,I got to think on it. and give it another go. That was free verse.. soooo that was to easy... but, I need to step up to the challenge.. you will see... I hope this will hush the crickets up for tonight.. LOL... xox..Linda

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    They've shut the 'F' up, after approaching with that write! Lmao
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:11:00 PM

    ***Fencing The Promising *** -- I am my opponent -- A mask with a hole-- Breathing heavily-- I dance around my own toes-- broad carbon steel-- safe behind my own face-- equipment of revenge-- fencing the world with my eyes-- ---------------------- I bow, with the morning dew,--- my mind a dual in it's own world.--- When the anchors lift,-- I prepare myself with a weapon-- Epee Crest to protect my chest-- A sword sharper than fangs-- I circle my blade around the door knob -- ready to face the world -- practicing in hopes today I won't retreat--

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Perfectly brilliant... I'm speechless. I'm scared to see the rest! You are in your own lane, full speed ahead. Look into your rearview, and you can see us!
    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/12/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    if you think it's okay. I will give the rest a second go. okay. don't worry, i used all 3 weapons in my poem..
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:07:00 PM

    Hello Scribe, I am watching out for you..LOL, not only did you leave me braindead... You left me speechless... hahaha.. towards you. I got to admit. I started the poem, then I took it to a free verse level. Umm. I'm ashamed of it. I let you down. :-( here let me post an example on the bottom... :-)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:51:00 PM

    Marlon, I have to say this is one of your best pieces. You touched an area that some men have a tough time exposing and you did it in your unique way. Another fav for me. Have to share this gem with a few men out there ;) got me smiling tonight! Special write indeed ;)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Poet... It means the works coming from you!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:23:00 PM

    Your writing was such an enjoyment to read today. Have a wonderful day. Cindy

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment and well wishes for the day. Your words are touching!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 7:09:00 AM

    an excellent write Scribe...with a beautiful ending...best wishes

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks JM! Your words suffice!
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:39:00 AM

    Reading this...was truly ...an exercise.into the realms of Excellence...You've expressed these .thoughts...i think a lot of us have felt...with such beauty and grace..i can only say thank you...for doing...what we don't have the gift...to do for ourselves. to my favs

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/12/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A comment of this magnitude leaves me speechless. Before writing this, I told my wife, the target was to speak words men have a hard time saying... You've confirmed the bullseye for me. Saying thank you, feels meager when someone tickles your soul with true kindness! Thanks Poet!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:16:00 PM

    I remember commenting on your work before, you're a meticulous writer yourself - good use of punctuation, deep meaning in your words - very good free verse here...and thanks for your lovely, kind comment on my poem :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Lady! I was truly moved by your work!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 4:16:00 PM

    Stunning poem Scribe. Very heartfelt and touching to one's core. Wishing you a great day. Hugs and love, Gail

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, you're comment touched me to my core!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:30:00 AM

    An epic of inexplicable proportions. Period. The heart is limitless. You proved that here. Let it shine....let it shine...

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have to get up off the floor, because of this comment. Thanks Drake!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:28:00 AM

    This is a burner...welcome to my world of writing "love songs"...lol A heartfelt write. We can only do our parts in making the woman feel secure and protected. Relationships aren't 100 percent but we strive for it like perfection. Just my two cents...great write fam

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You woke me up with laughter. The ultimate love poem for me, is the 'Heart Of Love' which you wrote!
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks fam! Good, who me? I'm just trying to head in that direction, G. I think something will light up once we've accomplished good.
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 9/11/2013 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    .lmao..you good fam..
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 9/11/2013 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always take care of home!!!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:07:00 AM

    HOLA Marlon; Come estas? I hope U.R. doing good. If you say you are sorry - I know you mean it. What can I say, you out did yourself with this poem. It will go to my favs. Rare is the man who is atentive to emotion and attention. I like those lines. Have a blessed day..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:06:00 AM

    HOLA Marlon; Come estas? I hope U.R. doing good. If you say you are sorry - I know you mean it. What can I say, you out did yourself with this poem. It will go to my favs. Rare is the man who is atentive to emotion and attention. I like those lines. Have a blessed day..... Lucilla

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All is well lady... And i do appreciate you and what you bring to poetry. Thanks for the continuous support!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:42:00 AM

    Sweetheart, you have put together an awesome poem. THIS one is going into my favs! Love and hugs, Catie :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You inspired mewith those leading lines. Thanks for the comment and opportunity!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:53:00 AM

    To my fvs

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 3:52:00 AM

    As you sleep within the heart of solace,subconsciously the scent of your hair,tatoos cherished moments upon my soul+Im in love with such verses.I love the softer part of your thoughrs as much as the powerful one and i love the msg re rain and sun for seeds to grow..as so does life need both the storm and summer song.Excellent post and tnks for your beautiful comment.Adorable kid in the avatar

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, poet! I believe you're the best when it comes to penning verses of beauty and love...that's my grandchild, she's something else : )
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 11:58:00 PM

    Whoa Scribe! This one I have to ruminate about-it's crazy deep. Nice going.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Vicky! Taking a stab at a softer side of myself. I appreciate your presence poet!
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 11:36:00 PM

    A very interesting write, here. Scribe, I enjoying going through these strong and yet tender lines...What a mix. My favorite? The scent of your hair tattoos cherished memories upon my soul...SWEET

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 9/11/2013 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks lady, you made me smile!