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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:49:00 PM
    This my friend is a real treasure of a poem. one that should be kept close to the heart. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Love it. Feeling every line. I was swept away on the wings of an imagery in my mind. Soothe and breathtaking. Thank you

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:48:00 PM
    A very impressive detail poem

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 8:14:00 AM
    what happen to last nights poem... xox..mail........ .Linda

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:18:00 AM
    I will fav this, whence this comes from, I'm as certain as the fact that the angels are busy weaving your red carpet, for your silver tomorrows, you bring nothing but goodness into my life, by your deep and cutting edge poetry, Scribe, you are the salt of poetry soup, I'm blessed to read your work, this is going to be a great day, all my love I pour unto you, bro, I love you xxx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 1:31:00 PM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 4:59:00 AM
    Yes indeed Scribe!...Loving fearlessly is the true key, leaving no room for the petty, evil emotions that would destroy it...Enjoyed this baby to the max sir - Tim

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:34:00 AM
    - A poem that makes me happy .. - Sensitive, soft and beautiful .. Your soul glows through. - Wish you a nice weekend, Marlon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:19:00 PM
    another PS... I'm storming your poem up with comments... LOL :-) Luv Linda

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:17:00 PM the feeling and magic that ran across my mind after reading your poem. a sweet sensation, and feeling when cradled with security... always a Fan... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:14:00 PM
    wait wait! I have more... But, like I said,,,I got to think on it. and give it another go. That was free verse.. soooo that was to easy... but, I need to step up to the challenge.. you will see... I hope this will hush the crickets up for tonight.. LOL... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:11:00 PM
    ***Fencing The Promising *** -- I am my opponent -- A mask with a hole-- Breathing heavily-- I dance around my own toes-- broad carbon steel-- safe behind my own face-- equipment of revenge-- fencing the world with my eyes-- ---------------------- I bow, with the morning dew,--- my mind a dual in it's own world.--- When the anchors lift,-- I prepare myself with a weapon-- Epee Crest to protect my chest-- A sword sharper than fangs-- I circle my blade around the door knob -- ready to face the world -- practicing in hopes today I won't retreat--

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    Date: 9/12/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    if you think it's okay. I will give the rest a second go. okay. don't worry, i used all 3 weapons in my poem..
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:07:00 PM
    Hello Scribe, I am watching out for you..LOL, not only did you leave me braindead... You left me speechless... hahaha.. towards you. I got to admit. I started the poem, then I took it to a free verse level. Umm. I'm ashamed of it. I let you down. :-( here let me post an example on the bottom... :-)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Marlon, I have to say this is one of your best pieces. You touched an area that some men have a tough time exposing and you did it in your unique way. Another fav for me. Have to share this gem with a few men out there ;) got me smiling tonight! Special write indeed ;)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Your writing was such an enjoyment to read today. Have a wonderful day. Cindy

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 7:09:00 AM
    an excellent write Scribe...with a beautiful wishes

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:16:00 PM
    I remember commenting on your work before, you're a meticulous writer yourself - good use of punctuation, deep meaning in your words - very good free verse here...and thanks for your lovely, kind comment on my poem :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 9:30:00 AM
    An epic of inexplicable proportions. Period. The heart is limitless. You proved that here. Let it shine....let it shine...

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:28:00 AM
    This is a burner...welcome to my world of writing "love songs" A heartfelt write. We can only do our parts in making the woman feel secure and protected. Relationships aren't 100 percent but we strive for it like perfection. Just my two cents...great write fam

    Date: 9/11/2013 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry good fam..
    Date: 9/11/2013 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always take care of home!!!
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:07:00 AM
    HOLA Marlon; Come estas? I hope U.R. doing good. If you say you are sorry - I know you mean it. What can I say, you out did yourself with this poem. It will go to my favs. Rare is the man who is atentive to emotion and attention. I like those lines. Have a blessed day..... Lucilla