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  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Excellent! I read the comments below before reading the poem so I broke out my old guitar and strummed all the way through it. Very nice lyrically and musically. thanks Becca for making me happy! Love it.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:00:00 PM
    A very "electrifying" piece of poetry! I really enjoyed the flow of this poem, and the story told within it. Very descriptive throughout, as well. Fantastic poem, Becca!...Thank you for the nice comments, once again!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 6:06:00 AM
    - The forces of nature inspire .... a beautiful poem .... (I'm a little uncomfortable with thunder) - Have a nice weekend .... hope the sun will shine on you, Becca! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 5:26:00 AM
    a vivid and passionate depiction which can be read either way, as an actual thunderstorm...or metaphor for something cleverly penned, anyway

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 6:04:00 PM
    Hi Becca, A wonderfully crafted write.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Tension gathers that line. I agree with all of the commentary below. This was sensational! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Captivating, inviting and thrilling the imagination! Superb!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Good afternoon Becca, I hope you are having a great day.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:08:00 AM
    you talk of a breath of the sky,, well i feel a breath of fresh air reading this wonder Becca, this is truly poetry at its best...

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Obviously not just a fair weather friend you have there lol beautiful write Becca, Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Wow... I really like this one. ~ Soupmail ~

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:05:00 AM
    How beautifully you write sweet friend of mine..tickling alll senses.Excellent!!! Tnks for stopping by dear..My entrance in deb's contest is 'Till last magnolia blooms' ..Gee its my third time participating in five yrs here..Am excited.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Makes a guy want to get caught in a storm. Well done Becca.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:30:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:44:00 PM
    beautiful write Becca...I like how you described the rain...hugs

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Nice one, Becca...saying so much in such a subtle way...There is grace in doing that.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:49:00 PM
    In the light of the storm it creates an ocean of thoughts and feelings throughout, and you have shared a lot of this intrigue within this thoughtful track! I really enjoyed reading this fascinating poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, such an amazing write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Hello beautiful. amaze me with your art work. ...the imagery here is awesome. Its as if you're sitting or standing at the window painting away. Excellent, excellent excellent. ..hugs :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 3:20:00 PM
    An absolutely gorgeous write my dear sweet Rebecca! A BRILLIANT ABSORBING WRITE! WOW! I'm speechless, dear friend! No only are you a sweetheart, you are a talented sweetheart as well! SO IMPRESSED! Love, love, love you xoxox