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SLOW DOWN

I look at remains of the morning craving it deep more time to manage my life and complete Can my cramped life handle one more thing? can the eyes of our soul see life’s swing? No single advantage gained to hurry a thousand broken things missed to flurry Bulls in a china shop we break our lives missing precious moments as trivial thrives Worlds addicted speed mechanics skills maintain blur unholy moments and smear mercy drains They say time is money- that is not true this is what God intended for us to do: time to breathe deeply time to see what’s real time to laugh longer time to rest peacefully time to give Him the Glory time with Him in Eternity “We are merely moving shadows and all our busy rushing ends in nothing” – Psalm 39:6 ©September 2013—Kim van Breda

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  1. Date: 11/15/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Let's do as God pleases for the kingdoms of the world shall become His

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 11:18:00 AM

    Slow down, you move too fast... you got to watch the flowers growing...thanks for reminding me...

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:48:00 AM

    This is a powerful and a necessary reminder Kim.. Hope the week ahead will be a great one for you :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:37:00 AM

    yes to days world, is so false yet the body will slow down, if one today becomes old enough....excellent pooetry...

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:42:00 AM

    so true. here's to peaceful rest. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 1:30:00 PM

    Kim, I really like this! A lovely write full of truth. Going in my favs! Love, Kim M

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:34:00 AM

    You couldn't be more right. Time cannot be money, because you cannot take it with you when you're gone. Rushing to nowhere...how deeply true that is. Many need to be reminded of that. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:09:00 AM

    - Take it easy ... Life goes too fast ... enjoy it while it's there .... tomorrow is not coming back ... Pleasant to read your words and thoughts, Kim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Kim, thanks for sharing the blessing thought of time and eternity... always..Linda